Hahahaha, that's hilarious! Good idea for a one-shot. Well done :D
-Chanelle Report Review
I love the story.
It's funny and cute.
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That was incredibly funny! What a way to get Lily to kiss James! I loved it! Great job, 14lilyflowergirl!Author's Response: thanks for reveiwing! Report Review
HAHAHAHH its such a cute flufyy one shot! its great.
i wanted to respond your reveiew on my story, bt its not working so i thought id stop by ur place :P. didnt regret it. keep it upAuthor's Response: that's fine thanks for commenting!!! Report Review
nice one very nice i can definitly picture it well kind ofAuthor's Response: I really should've stopped and taken more time to describe it in detail more, but I just wanted the idea down, it's just a fluffy little thing Report Review
that was bloody hilarious,can i love Sirius even more.i think we all ask ourselves that each time he's in something i really is not fair that he dies
"Oh gross!" i barely held myself together at that part.Author's Response: I'm happy it got you laughing, everyone needs a laugh (Hey Harry said that in the 4th book in different words to Fred and George!) I'm sad that Sirius died that undeserved death too. I love the last part too! Thanks for reading! Report Review
hehe this fic made me laugh!lol but didn't u 4got to change the status of th story as it is WIP instead of COMPLETED. keep up the good work.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Not kidding, I just changed the status! Thanks anyway! Glad you thought it was funny. Thanks for reading Report Review
I liked this story a lot, very creative :). There is a few spelling errors but other than that it was really good! Keep on writing!Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to find the spelling errors (I stink at anything to do with spelling) I appreciate your comment(I just know I spelled that wrong.) thanks for reading! Report Review
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