Really Sweet :) You should write more stories :) Report Review
I could totally see this happening haha! Loved it :D Report Review
This story was great! I was smiling the whole time. You definitely have a way of throwing curve balls in, right when I started to think where you might be heading with the story, I was totally wrong.
It was short and sweet. When I read the last line, I couldn't help but smile. "He'd spend the rest of his life making it up to her, if she let him." Just so sweet and in a way powerful! Amazing!! xox Report Review
u ot 2 writ more for this story Report Review
i'm only writing this explanation because i need more words
loved it !!! Report Review
this was a fun little one-shot with a pleasant storyline. nice job on this. i enjoyed it very very much. Report Review
so cute! great job 10/10 Report Review
WOW!!! this was so great! loved it!! Report Review
You have NO idea, really, how brilliant you are.
Even though you said that something I said validated the fact that your writing style was off, that isn't a bad thing.
As a writer, yes, you should find your groove and style and what not, but then there is also the ability to throw something at your readers to not only intrigue them, but to throw them off a little to see where you are going. I'd love you to do a murder/mystery...I think your ability to disguise, even if you don't mean to, your writing style opens more avenues for you.
I loved this story, It was a great read, but funny and had all the Dramione goodness a fan like me needs. You did a wonderful job! Love ya dearest!!! *glomp* Report Review
cute! Loved your story! Report Review
This story made my life. =] Report Review
Too sweet! I love this couple and I thought Draco was like a cute Knight in Shining Armor. Lol! Great job! Report Review
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