I don't know if you still read reviews for this story, I hope you do.
I read 'Unfaithful' and was a bit dissatisfied with the ending. I felt it was perhaps 500 words short. So for my own satisfaction I wrote those words.
I was pleased when, reading this chapter, the subject of children came up. The ending I wrote for 'Unfaithful' deals with just that subject. I actually figured out a way for Ginny and Hermione to impregnate each other, without magic.
I wish I could share it with you. Why did you feel that you had to abandon this story? Report Review
Is there going to be another one? Report Review
There aren't many femmeslash accounts but yours is by FAR the best!! Please, please, please unabandon this story because i read the first story then started reading this and i was filled with suspission and excitement because i couldn't wait to see what was coming next! Please concider writing more because alot of us are really dissapointed that you dont want to write more :( love this story set!
10/10 for this chapter btw :D x Report Review
Unabandon this! I never read femmeslash before but, this might change that.Author's Response: Oh... you can check out my other femmeslash stories if you want. I lost the inspiration to continue this, or I'll continue but repost it on fanfiction dot net. But till then I'll have to finish my other WIPs. ^^ Report Review
Yep, it may be older but it's still brilliant. I was wondering if you were going to update it any time soon. :) cause I wanna know what happens. Author's Response: Thank you for reading. :) Report Review
Awesome :) you've fast become a favorite author.Author's Response: My older works... hehehe They ain't of the same quality like my new ones. But thanks! :) Report Review
Excellent and please update soon thanks as I am enjoying the story.Author's Response: Thanks, Karkaroff! Wow, did you really commented on all my stories? *blushes* It's like I keep seeing your penname everywhere and this makes me SO happy! :D Report Review
Ooh I was very interested to start this story! This is probably the best portrayal of the trio in an AU story that I've come across. Every development makes sense and you always have a good alternative for why Ron didn't end up with Hermione, Harry didn't end up with Ginny, etc. I could totally see Ron running back to Lavender - I mean, who else if not Hermione? And Francine sounds like a nice girl but one of those people who are really annoying just by being nice; I can understand Ginny's feelings towards her. I love your Hermione/Ginny even more than your Hermione/Pansy ... these two girls have been friends for a long time so it's more natural to establish a relationship between them. They're so cute together! Anyway, the end of this chapter was really dramatic ... so many feelings and emotions and battling personalities all mixed together!Author's Response: Ohh. Thank you! You really reviewed! :)
About this story, it's actually a sequel to Unfaithful. You've started reviewing that a long time ago (er...last year?), but I was so slow with updating the story that most of my readers forgot the plot. LOL *coughs* I've completed Unfaithful, though, and now I wrote this sequel.
I've never written a sequel to a novella before, but I hope this was quite okay. I've mentioned many scenes/events from the last few chapters of Unfaithful in this first chapter...
Anyway, thank you Jules! :) Your reviews are always motivating, but don't be shy to give me some critiques, too. ^_^ Report Review
Hi I think that Francine is feeling lonely and un-appriciated and now she wants to fufill that void with Hermoine.
I think that she wants attetion and That kiss is re-playing in her mind again and again.
By the way when are updating every Rose has a Thorn?Author's Response: Yes, that's right. I was trying to make Francine feel that way. There's something unfulfilled in her life, which she'll probably discover with Hermione soon.
Oh that other story, I'm currently working on Golden Rules. I hope to get to update all of my WIP stories soon. I'm sorry... :(
Thanks for the kind feedback. I love it. :) Report Review
Really good so far. I'm glad you made a sequel. I can't believe Fracine feels so strongly that she would dye her hair! I wonder what Ginny would do if she knew how Francine felt. And what she would do if she found out that Hermione and Francine had kissed, even though Hermione and Ginny weren't together at the time.Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a comment. :)
Yeah, Francine's not completely happy with herself and her appearance, even though she has everything one can dream of.
I'm glad you decided to read this story. And that you've read Unfaithful, too. Thanks a million. :) Report Review
I truly love the prequel and I'm glad you've decided to write a sequel. :)
-LexAuthor's Response: Thanks. :) Report Review
I can't wait for the next chapter! I' m glad you're doing a sequel to Unfaithful. Keep writing and please update soon:)
~hpf14Author's Response: Thanks, Syd! :) Report Review
So glad you've started the sequel, I really enjoyed the first story and I think I'm going to enjoy this one 2. Lots of drama in the first chapter and I can't wait to read more!!Author's Response: Aw... thank you! :) Report Review
I loved it Mitch. I only just came back onto HPFF, so I didn't realise this was up.
I loved the first scene with Hermione and Ginny, that look so cute together. I think that Ginny should have an affair or something with Harry, and ends up being pregnant. That would throw a twist into the plot :)
Ron is such a wanker. I love how you portray him. I never liked him as much as the other characters in HP.
Francine still annoys me. She is such a pretty princess. I have a feelings that it would be scary to miss your monthly cycle, but why would you want a contraceptive potion. I want her to run off with Ron, or someone else in the Quidditch team.
So, I adored it. I can't wait for the next chapter.Author's Response: Hi Amy! You came back to review! Thanks *huggles* Thank you for reading the sequel to Unfaithful and leaving this wonderful review. I wasn't sure how to write this since I've never written a chaptered sequel to a chaptered fic before. Hmm... Report Review
i thought that this was an absolutely beautiful start to a story and really have no complaints to offer your way. your descriptions were amazing and your word choice very compromising. poor, poor Ron though. he always gets the hard blows, doesn't he? anyways, this was a very enjoyable read and i think that it has a promising future.Author's Response: Thank you, confusedlover! I'll definitely get back and request another review from you. :) *huggles*
Ron is so hatefull right now.
What typical behaviour Itīs been three years .
DOESNīT HE KNOW ANYTHING A MAN CAN DO A WOMAN CAN DO BETTER. HEHEAuthor's Response: I LOL'ed at that. xD
Poor Ron, right? But don't worry about him. :)
Thanks for dropping by, hun! Report Review
YAY! It's here! So far it's great! But poor old Ronnikins.
Lately all the stories I've been reading have been giving him a pretty bum deal. Either that or he is portrayed as a complete idiot...in which case I stop reading :P
This is great so far! I look forward to more :DAuthor's Response: Don't worry about Ron! :D He's fine, and will even change here. I'm glad you liked it so far... :) Thanks, Sammy! :) Report Review
A very long chapter. I like it that way. Not only did you intorduce a new plotline, you also explained the old one in full detail. I am waiting eagarly for the next xhapter and I hope to see it soon.Author's Response: Yeah, I did repeat and explain a bit the prequel to this. I thought that'd be better, to have the readers understand this story IF they hadn't read the prequel. :) Thanks for reviewing, Judi! :D Report Review
I really liked your story.
Write more please. :)Author's Response: Oh, thanks. :) Report Review
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