AWWW! So cute! I thought it was really good! Your portrayals of Molly and Arthur were fabulous. I aslo loved your descriptive language. Great job.Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you thought so. Report Review
I found this to be absolutely adorable! I haven't read that many Arthur/Molly fics, but I enjoyed this one! :]
-LEMONSKY4Author's Response: I'm glad that even though you haven't read many stories with this pairing, you still gave this a shot :) I've never read a story with this pairing, but writing this enlightened me about them. Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
I love it! It's so good! I love romance!Author's Response: Thank you! I don't think Molly/Arthur fics are very popular, so I'm glad you took the time out to read and enjoy this one. Report Review
Hi There, I'm Rachel and I'm from the forums to review.
I haven't read very many Arthur/Molly oneshots, but I have to admit I thoughoughly enjoyed this one. I thought you wrote it in an extremely mature manner and I enjoyed your descriptions. You cleverly crafted a very good idea and fit it into a oneshot.
I enjoyed your characterizations of Molly, I think you had her down perfectly. I didn't see any spelling or grammar issues so that is another plus. I have nothing to critique on!
RachelAuthor's Response: Before writing this I hadn't even thought to read or write an Arthur/Molly fic. This was done for a challenge, so looking back on it I'm so happy I happened to be given this pairing to write on. I really had fun while working on this and I'm so glad that you were able to enjoy it. Thanks so much for the lovely comments! :D Report Review
Hey, it's DarkRose from the forums!
I know, I know, I took FOREVER to read and review this, I kind of forgot about the challenge... :[
But now, to the review!
I loved it!! :D
I've never read a Molly/Arthur story before but this was so well written that I may start reading them more often.
Your characterization and descriptions were amazing. I loved reading your sentences. You also didn't have any spelling/grammar mistakes! Yay you!
Really, really good job, I'll post in the challenge soon to announce the winners. :]
--DracoFerret11/DarkRoseAuthor's Response: It's really okay, I swear! :D I completely understand forgetting things every now and then. I'd forget my head if it wasn't screwed on to my body. Thank you so much for the review, though! It means a lot that you enjoyed it, because it was my first time writing the pairing and I would have never thought to try before entering your challenge. Thanks so much for everything, from the wonderful feedback to just the opportunity to try something new. Report Review
awww. I've never read any Molly/arthur one shots. This was enjoyable to read and your descriptions were amazing. I loved it. I thought every moment was cute especially his use of the nickname for her. :)
10/10 :)Author's Response: That makes two newbies out of the both of us, because I've never written a Molly/Arthur story prior to this one! :D I'm so happy that you enjoyed it so much. I was really aiming for cute, so I'm glad you picked up on that. Thanks so much for the lovely review! Report Review
aww!!! i really liked it. so cute!!Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've never written this pairing before. Report Review
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