Love it!! Keep the amazing work coming!!!Plz Report Review
Trouble is brewing and to have the twins and Jay Jay doing the plotting against you, lets just say even Heaven is not safe from these three. Love the chapter. Well written and I hope Marcus Flint gets double in return for the hurt he caused JUles. Glad this chapter has finally come out. Can't wait for the next one. Report Review
love the story can't wait to see what happens to flint! Report Review
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God, I waited long enough for this--sure was worth the wait. Usually I don't like stories about the twins, but I love this one. I still keep getting a sinking feeling knowing what's suppose to happen to the twins. Love the story and the pace of it. Keep up the great work my friend. Report Review
this story is amazing :) i really enjoyed the first chapter Report Review
wow great first chapter you have a really good balance between wit and drama which is uber good. I think I'm going to like Julia! i love how the twins and Jordan become all maternal when Julia goes all shivery with the dementors! yaay! i like i like!
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Love it! Love it! The story's getting better and better. I'm glad I check every day for a new chapter. Really like this. Don't ever let this story go unfinish my friend. Look forward to the next chapter. Report Review
lolz loved it
it was amazing
keep writing Report Review
It keeps getting better with each chapter. Thought the thoughts and ideas flow rather well, and poor Fred can't see the girl throwing herself at him. A good write. Love the story. Report Review
It's cute, keep going! I like the new take on the twins as well :) Report Review
omg i loved it
it was sad and cute
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George's no dopehead. Like this very much and have added it to my favorites as well. Keep up the good work. I can't wait until the next post my friend. Report Review
A great beginning--and a little sad as well with whom she seems to be falling for. Life is never fair as they say. Really a great write. Report Review
please please please don't stop writing!Author's Response: I won't! Thanks for reading. Report Review
i loved it plz write moreAuthor's Response: I'm glad you loved it, I will most definitely write more :) Report Review
Great start! Wonderfully stupendous! Everybody is great, fantastic characterization. Especially that Julia, eh? Witty, charming, intelligent, stubborn, up for a little mischief, what's not to love? All lovely characteristics for a heroine. Can't wait for more.
~3 Guesses Who :DAuthor's Response: ooh ooh oooh! WAS IT THE SANDMAN?! lol i Report Review
First review :)
I'm honoured as i'm sure there will be many many more reviews for this story.
Okay first off love it.
The characters (some of my favourites) seem very realistic especially that quiditch obsessed moron that we all love dearly, Oliver.
It was well written and I liked that you remembered appearance of the dementors in that particular train ride. Julia' s reaction was interesting I wonder what exactly in her past she doesnt want to remember?
This is going in my favourites :)
And I noticed you have another couple of Oliver fics which i'm off to read now.
-Mrs Regulus BlackAuthor's Response: Well, I must say I'm honoured to have you review my story! As for Oliver, well, I love him but I wanted to take a new sort of look at him since I'm always making him out to be some sort of angel, lol. Anyway, thanks for reading! Report Review
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