what will happen next ? so excited

Author's Response: thanks for the review :) and you'll just have to check back to find out ;P

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hurry with the new chapter!! its sooo interesting!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) next chapter should be up soonish :)

Hope you stick around for more :P

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I read this story in one go, and cried through the whole thing. It's so heartbreaking, but really great. Can't wait to find out how everybody greets Taylor.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) sorry for making you cry, but I'm glad you enjoyed it in spite of that!

Shouldn't be too long til the next chapter, hopefully :)

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Love the story pretty pleeease update again soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) and I'm glad you're enjoying it.. shouldn't be too long until the next update :)

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yah. it wasn't your best chapter
Can't wait for the next one though!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.. I was having a really hard time with this chapter, I'm not sure why.. The next chapter has just gone into the queue so hopefully it won't be too long 'til it's up :)

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Am I the only person that knows James was a seeker, not a chaser, because Harry got his seeker skills from his dad. Read the books people!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review but I'd appreciate you getting your facts straight before you say something like that to me. I pride myself on being a complete Potter Nerd.. I don't make mistakes like that.

James Potter was a chaser in the book. In the film he was a seeker. So instead of telling me to read the books maybe you should take your own advice. Kay?

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well i guess it's okay: actually forget about that it's wonderful, you have to post more.

Author's Response: Well that very nearly made me sad :P actually thought you didn't like it for a second there..

I'm glad you liked it and I will be posting the next chapter soon :)

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Nooo, why cliffy, why. ):
THese past few chapters have been so good, that they've been able to bring tears to my eyes... Good job. (:
Keep up the good work and keep posting! :D
~Khanh

Author's Response: Because I wanted to prolong the reading experience? and my hands were starting to hurt from typing all night.. but I've already written the next one now I'm just being mean :P

I had no idea that this would make anyone cry! And I'm slightly ashamed to say it makes me rather happy that the story is having an effect.

I will post the next chapter soon :)

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Awww, poor Riley. I feel so bad for her, how James had unknowingly got her hopes up. ):

Author's Response: I know! But I've decided that after the next chapter something good might happen for her.. I just haven't figured out what yet :/

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Good job on this chapter. (:
I'm just a bit confused... if James transforms into a stag as an Animagus, I don't think he can do a dog as well. I thought you can only have one animal that best fits your personality?
Ah, well.
~Khanh

Author's Response: Thank you :) and thank you again for the review.. it makes me so happy when I see new ones- it doesn't happen often- but to see that someone has taken the time to review multiple chapters makes me all giddy inside :D

And yes, for animagus transformation you only get one animal.. but in this case he was transfigured using a spell that Riley was casting and in control of so she got to choose the animal to change him into..

Hope that cleared it up a bit.. I did consider than when I was writing it but decided that the two of them as dogs would be more interesting in a classroom and thought out a loophole :D

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Hmm, this is a unique James/Lily story... told from his secret admirer's point of view. Interesting... This certainly caught my attention and I'll gladly continue readi... I have a soft spot for Marauder stories... XD
~Khanh

Author's Response: That's kind of what I was going for, I don't think I've seen one like this before but- and this is going to sound WAY corny but- I had a dream and though 'well that would make a good marauder story' and here we are :D

I'm glad you're enjoying it and thank you for the review.

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this is getting interesting!!! i can't wait to read more!!! ^_^

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Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you so much for sticking with the story.. I was really stuck with it for a while but I've enlisted some help and its started moving again :) I'm just about to upload the next chapter so it should be up soon :)

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i think James will regret what he said to Riley despite being angry with her. i wonder what's going to happen now... will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Sorry about the delay, I've had a hectic year at college but the story is back underway again now that I'm done with college.. hopefully you haven't totally lost interest :/

I've just sent a chapter for validation and I'm working on the next one.. soo.. yeah sorry about that.. :D

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oh no! James danced all night with Riley and even kissed her but he thinks it's Lily! i can't wait to see what's going to happen right now! by the way, if u let me i can choose the characters 4 the banner u asked me to make.^_^

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Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: I actually can't wait to find out either but I haven't gotten very far with the whole writing the next chapter thing.. College work and all that is needing to take priority unfortunately.. I have a Riley, and a James but I don't know about the other marauders or Lily.. I would be grateful for any ideas you might have about

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is she really a guardian angel (is that why her hearing is so good?)? why does sirius hate her?

Author's Response: erm.. if I'm completely honest, I don't really know what she is yet.. so for now I'll just say that she's a normal witch with abnormally good hearing.. besides, you wouldn't want me to spoil it would you? :P

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Good story so far, hope you update again soon. Only mishap I really picked up on was that you said that she was a pureblood but then in the last paragraph she says "well except that we get to play with wands and magic and stuff that I wouldn’t have ever expected when I was growing up". If she was a pureblood then this wouldn't have been any surprise to her.

Anyways, interesting story and update again soon plix plox.

Author's Response: thanks for the review xD ... this is a very good point.. I'll fix that at some point.. thanks for pointing it out.. I'll get writing the next chapter now :)

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another great chapter and i think Lily needs a lesson so she can learn that she can't hurt James like that. i can make u a banner if u want. send a reply to: s _ alexandra25 @ hotmail . com (it doesn't have spaces). i hope u will update soon please! this story has potential to be fantastic.^_^

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Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: thanks for the reviews :) I've just finished chapter three so I'll post it when I'm done here.. it would be great if you could do a banner for me, but I'm not sure what I want on it. I haven't really thought about it since I was so close to giving up on the story, so I'll just go email you...

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great start 4 the 1st chapter.^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: thanks :) this was really just to introduce the characters but I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

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