This is beautiful. Simply beautiful!
The second person narrative is wonderful and really suits the mood of the piece.
God, I wish I could write like you.
10/10Author's Response: Thanks sweets!
Haha, trust me my earlier writing was nothing short of horrific, I guess with age comes skills, and lots of practise! But I don't pretend to have skill in this. These kind of stories only hit me in short fluid bursts and then BAM, writers block afterwards. =( Kinda a sucky deal there huh? :P Report Review
I have never read a well writen Second Person POV before but you did an amazing job with it.
Good work and writing.
Best regards StevieAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so much, Stevie!
That means the world to me! =) Report Review
it's good. Actually, it's kinda like a forward that I wrote for one of the stories I'm working on, except I wrote mine in first person. Good job, 10/10
-TAuthor's Response: haha thank you!
Glad to know! =D Report Review
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