Reading Reviews for Breaking Point
  
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Review #1, by Timechild Chapter 1

26th February 2009:
Cute chapter. Rose as a Prefect, not bad.

You need to change "grade" to "year", the books don't use the word grade in the canon. Unless you did that on purpose. Grade is an American term.

Nicely written

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