hm. it was good! i havent really read many lilly/james where they arent in love! it was interesting differnt! but i enjoyed it! your an amazing fan fic author! this piece certinly shows it! but it wasnt really my type of fic!Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! Yeah, it is a pretty depressing story so I understand that it isn't your kind of fic. But I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
woah...i know its sad but i enjoyed reading it.
I honestly like happy endings better but you wrote this very well.its realistic and you adapted the song really good.
but if you were to write it again...just like a ...recomendation -dont hate me!!- but i think that you should end the song and make james come and say sorry or something like that, make the relationship work out in the end. so it can have a happy ending :)
just a comment/recomemdation :) 8/10Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)
Hmm ... I know what you mean about the happy ending. Honestly, when I'm reading I hate it when things end unhappily, but this is just how the story turned out. It took me SO long to decide on the ending xD
I'm thinking about rewriting so thanks for the advice! Lol I definately don't hate you :) I LOVE advice!
awww... the story is pretty nice and it seems depressing..but over all, it's cool!!! It's cool when you used taylor swift's song!!! keep up the good work!!Author's Response: Thanks, and sorry for the late reply! Report Review
That is so incredibly depressing. And yet I find myself loving it. I never dared to think James and Lily weren't always hopelessly in love with each other. I thank you for opening me to that option. That was beautiful, and I love it. I thank you for writing this beautiful, sad, yet so brutually honest story A_Drowning_Fish.Author's Response: Aw . . . thank you so much! I\\\'m so glad you think it was good :)
I do love Lily and James as a couple, and I was originally going to write a story where they were in love, when this occured to me!
Sorry it\\\'s taken me so long to reply . . . I\\\'m not sure if you\\\'ll even see this . . . but thanks for reviewing! Report Review
maaan im going to go and slit my wrists. that was depressing, quite good though 7/10
I hate when Lily and James fall out tof love.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Sorry it\\\'s taken me forever to respond
I do think Lily and James are the perfect couple too :) I was just trying to write something a bit differents, so I\\\'m glad you think it was good.
Thanks again! Report Review
Painfully depressing. I kinda like it. Like.. 8/10ish.Author's Response: yeah . . . it kinda was. Ah well, thanks for reviewing and rating! Report Review
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