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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by blimmchen who what and where

29th February 2004:
Well your first chapter is very short, by I already think that you´re story will get good. So keep writing and have a look at mine. Bye

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Review #2, by chris who what and where

26th February 2004:
u need to write longer capters dude short too short make capter 2 much longer so i can get a feel for the story

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Review #3, by hubbabubba12 who what and where

25th February 2004:
Good, but short.

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Review #4, by padfootmoonshadow who what and where

24th February 2004:
whoa (retro bill dude!) that chapter was pretty short, but u better write more!

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