Pretty good. I'm trying to read all crossover (non-mature). I know, it's crazy and it's gonna take forever, but it'll give me something to do! I liked the longest paragraph that started "He went upstairs two at a time". I thought it was very well written and good on the romance side. What is it a crossover with?Author's Response: Perman! it is shown on nick channel. Report Review
Interesting beginning. You could use a good beta. It would help you catch a few spelling errors. Overall, not a bad story, though.Author's Response: Heh...Heh... sorry (rubs the back ofhr neck smiling stupidly) i'll try not to make such silly mistakes in future. but, thanx anyways. Report Review
Aw! That was sweet! I can't wait for you to do more!Author's Response: Hey thanx a lot! Report Review
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