6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by arbi190 Luna's Dream

31st August 2010:
why the hell is harry in slitherin!

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Review #2, by mikel Luna's Dream

18th September 2009:
Actually, I thought it was pretty good. Maybe you should work on the spelling and grammar, but other than that, it was a great plot line.

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Review #3, by hpgirl Luna's Dream

24th February 2009:
i loved it! it was realy good

Author's Response: thank you very much. ^,,^
your very kind.


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Review #4, by Kishka Luna's Dream

23rd February 2009:
good story except that you called Cho, Chow. Plus I have a question, is it your intention for the characters to appear rather oc? If so then it's a cool story, if not then you might want to check into that. But yeah I liked your beginning, keep going its good!

Author's Response: thanks. sorry about that. okay, i will, and thank you.

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Review #5, by Maesygirl Luna's Dream

23rd February 2009:
Good story! I really enjoyed it!
A few spelling and grammer errors but other than that it was good.
But "Chow" is spelt "Cho" :]

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm very glad you liked it.
and sorry about that, and thanks.


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Review #6, by *~~***0***~~* Luna's Dream

23rd February 2009:
this was o.k., a little bit confusing, and akward. ease up on the curses.

Author's Response: Yup, some of my friends agree with that too.
okay. i will try to make the next chapter less confusing, and i will ease up on the cursing.


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