why the hell is harry in slitherin! Report Review
Actually, I thought it was pretty good. Maybe you should work on the spelling and grammar, but other than that, it was a great plot line. Report Review
i loved it! it was realy goodAuthor's Response: thank you very much. ^,,^
your very kind. Report Review
good story except that you called Cho, Chow. Plus I have a question, is it your intention for the characters to appear rather oc? If so then it's a cool story, if not then you might want to check into that. But yeah I liked your beginning, keep going its good!Author's Response: thanks. sorry about that. okay, i will, and thank you. Report Review
Good story! I really enjoyed it!
A few spelling and grammer errors but other than that it was good.
But "Chow" is spelt "Cho" :]Author's Response: Thank you. I'm very glad you liked it.
and sorry about that, and thanks. Report Review
this was o.k., a little bit confusing, and akward. ease up on the curses.Author's Response: Yup, some of my friends agree with that too.
okay. i will try to make the next chapter less confusing, and i will ease up on the cursing. Report Review
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