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Review #1, by frizbee_belle Chapter 1: Hate is a Strong Word but I Really, Really, Really donít like you

25th February 2009:
it's ok. i'm not sure how you can say that Scorpius is Rose's mate though, when she doesn't get on with him, from what you say in the summary. It's a bit confusing. :S Other than that it was good, though i doubt a teacher would give someone a detention just for telling someone to shut up - even if it is a Slytherin teacher.

can't wait to see where this goes.


Author's Response: Yeah, this was a pretty bad chappie...but thanks to reviewers like you(I feel like that PBS commercial XP) I know what to improve on. Thanks for reviewing, Vi.

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