Wow. Brilliant. I loved Snape's part in this story and I truly wasn't expecting it.
I hated Voldemort, even more so than usual, for what he's done to Regulus.
If only Regulus's ending wasn't so sad, so tragic :(Author's Response: Good! Unexpected is what I was going for, so I'm really happy that read.
Regulus really did come to a terrible fate, for someone who meant so well.
Thanks for the review!
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Snape was spot on, and I liked your Regulus characterisation. He's such a great character to write with because you can do with him whatever you want.
Anyway, this was written really well. The theme was so sad, but you handled it really well.
It was an interesting read =]
spam_up_samAuthor's Response: I totally agree with Regulus-- he's such an underrated character.
Oh, good-- Snape being a little too... loud, perhaps, was a big concern of mine.
Thankyouthankyou. I'm glad that your time wasn't wasted.
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Hi, Laur here from the forums with your evening news, I mean review (also that was really lame, and I apologize)
Right, I for one love Regulus as a character and think you portrayed his character really well. You could sense that he has doubts about everything, and I like this because you could picture it to be perhaps one of the driving points for him to become the R.A.B on the note that Harry and Dumbledore find. I also like how both him and Snape although marked by death eaters have the compassion you know they were capable of. and also however Regulus still referred to the word mudbloods - because as much as you imagine him to changed I always imagined he was still set in his ways a little bit. but really, I think you did a great job no complaints here! I'm sorry to say I don't know the song though!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review (it's all good. :)), and I'm so sorry it took me so long to reply.
Thank you! It's my first Marauder fic by myself, and my first ever working with Regulus, so I'm glad that I was able to get all of my points across clearly enough. I really love him; he was such a flat character at first, and then the cave and the locket, and BAM! he's got about forty different dimensions. It's great.
It's a great song, but I suppose a little off putting if you aren't Japanese. :P
Thanks again for such a great review, I really appreciate it!
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