Cool. I like the story line. I don't think anyone has ever done a story quite like this with Remus, Tonks, and Fred after they died. I like it. Nice idea with the Marauders Meeting. Like it. It definately seems like something they would do! But why is Fred or Gred in it then? Haha! nice nicknames! Good job!
Clair ClementineAuthor's Response: Hey Clair, thanks so much for reading! As for why Fred (Gred) was there, the basis of the spell was explained in Lily' little speech.
*The purpose of it was that when a prankster, one who managed to make McGonagall laugh, would come here after death, to wait for the others before moving on.*
That's the point, basically. I figured, if their manner of departure in OotP didn't make McGonagall laugh, then nothing possibly could. Hope that cleared your question up! Thanks again for reading, and keep an eye out for anything new that might be coming!
~CGG Report Review
really good story funny and sad I like it a lot Report Review
Beautiful, Wonderful and Sad. Could you, Would you, think about doing one or two more chapters? One could be, after the Marauders come back from the Forest, another could be when the Battle is over, and they all go on. Please think about it!Author's Response: Thanks, I'll consider it! If you have any suggestions... :) Thanks for reading! Report Review
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