What happened to Nia! She was all nice and decent and then all of a sudden the needy and desperate person pops out of her and its like "woah"

I have finally come across a story where James doesn't wound like a complete girl! HALLELUJAH!

 Report Review

You are a fantastic writer!!! Your story was all smiles and a lovely read! Thank you so much for writing such a marvelous piece of fiction! I read all of it in ONE go..(which didn't go down well with my boss though as i was glued to the pc even at office... but it was all worth it! This is also why i didn't take a break to review all the chapters (Sorry for that though.. i was just greedy for more ;)) Going to check out the sequel now... :)

 Report Review

Absolutely, positively AMAZING.

 Report Review

I love your characters! They're freakin awesome. Can't wait to finish and read the sequel.

 Report Review

Thanks for a great story that I stayed up till 6 reading I love it

Author's Response: Wow, four for you! That's awesome. I hope you enjoy the sequel!

 Report Review

I personally like Scorpios being a little ferret

Author's Response: I'm glad :) thank you!

 Report Review

I'd date bink. He's the nicest

Author's Response: Haha! I love Bink. He's lovely.

Thank you!

 Report Review

Oh my god is it weird that I actually ship Healey and James right now?

Author's Response: Haley? Nah, not weird. It's easy to ship something as uncomplicated as them. Most people did during this chapter.

Thank you!

 Report Review

One word:

Amazing

Author's Response: thank you so much! I really hope you enjoy the sequel :) :)

 Report Review

Great chapter! Pretty funny :)

I have a feeling Al and Paloma are both scared to make the first move (typical :P) and as for the gift, I have no clue whatsoever.

Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

Aw, that's so cute. And yes, quite intense. :P Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

A cheeseball, haha. That was funny. :P

"Kiss and Tell"? Well, someone's kissed, and someone's going to tell. Or something completely random ;) Great chapter, update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

That was so cute, with many, as you said, "aw" moments. I couldn't stop smiling! James is a hilarious drunk!

My favourite part is when he finaly admitted that he liked her, instead of just thinking her kissing is amazing. I mean, he thought she was amazing as a person, but he just SAID it out loud. It made all the difference.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

HAHA. Stealing quaffles. Oh James, I love you.

Lily so deserves it. He's not even playing favourites, she just has the leadership quality. Ahh GOOD CHOICE JAMES.

My sister. Already kicking!

HAHAHA.

Okay.

Wow.

I can't believe this story is over. I mean, it has a sequel, BUT BTQC IS OVER. HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE. I feel like you've written up fifty-four chapters of perfection here - with your perfect characters, perfect jokes, perfect plot twists, perfect everything. YOU PERFECT WRITER, YOU.

Now I'm going to fly over to the sequel. Amazing work, Janice ♥

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

I've always loved the friendships in this story. Either between Bink and Freddie and James, or James and Avery... whatever. They're just so realistic and wonderful.

Of course you can stay there forever. Shut up Avery. You can get pancakes later.

Ahaha they're just so cuuute ♥

AW THEY GOT TRYOUTS! :D

But I feel so bad for James, oh god. *sniff sniff* He should just start his own Quidditch team. Is that legal? Haha. But Jaaames. LET ME HUG YOU. IT'LL BE OKAY.

I'm going to cry, Janice. HAPPY NOW?!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

LOL BINK AND FREDDIE. They're too young to be having sex. That's why. Obviously. *cough*

I wished she would stop being so pretty. I wished I would stop fancying her.

Not that I fancied her. We were mates. Just mates. Simple.

Yeah, James. Sure. I believe you. Also, are they really racing elves? I love these guys XD

IT'S ALBUS *sits up straighter*

Ahaha. I love Hermione. She was always such a wonderful character in the books, despite being annoying and bossy ;)

Albus and his sexy sweater vests. Mmm.

Oh my god, he's so adorable. Why can't he be real? I don't know any guys who are virgins at my age and not a-holes. Actually, I don't really know that many guys who aren't jerks. WOE IS ME AND ALL THAT.

"Have you ever been killed?"

He shot me a look.

*snort* really, James. REALLY.

My brother. My baby brother had just taken out six blokes after one hexed me. Sure, he had probably been itching to do that for months, but I'd never seen him do anything like that. Every once in a while he'd shoot a stinger at me for being a git or smack me in the back of the head. But that was...well, nothing short of completely bad***.

(I forget what language is allowed in a review.)

BUT YES ALBUS THIS IS WHY I LOVE YOU. ♥ Eeek he is so adorable and wonderful JANICE WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY STANDARDS.

And now Fred. Your characters are so freaking perfect, you know that?

Yes. You do.

ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

HELLO HELLO HELLO I AM HERE TO READ AND REVIEW I HAVE MISSED THIS STORY SO MUCH SO HERE I AM!

:D

I love the Potter family. They're such a strong family, and I couldn't ever imagine them differently. :)

"Here's my advice," I said softly, my eyes on the open window above the bed across the room, "Fight for her. And if you are lucky enough to get her, don't let her go. Ever."

WHAT IS THIS JANICE. YOU BREAKING MY HEART? YES. YES IT IS.

And there it is again. I just want James and Avery to be honest with each other and love each other again. You know. With each other, because it's obvious they love each other. I've saying "each other" too much. Shut me up.

Aw Freddie. You cutie. ♥

LOL. Lawson. But I think I've read this chapter before, so I know what happens... :S

ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

The amount of bravery/stupidity James displays here is astounding ;D but seriously, playing with an injury? What if it got worse? Actually, drop the "what if", it definitely got worse! DON'T MAKE ME GO IN THERE, JAMES SIRIUS POTTER.

On the other hand, I am ridiculously proud of this boy. He's right, as I can grudgingly admit... if this was my last time doing something I love, I would give it my ALL. No question. So yes, I am quite proud of that boy. *ruffles hair affectionately*

BUT LILY?! No. Unacceptable. Go to your room.

;)

BUT THEY WON! IT WAS LIKE THE QUIDDITCH CUP EXCEPT A LOT MORE VIOLENT! YAYAYAYAY THEY WON!!

IN YOUR UGLY FACE, LAWSON!!!

And I truly enjoyed that moment at the end.

Javery forever. ♥

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

Reading and reviewing at the same time.

OHMYGOD JAMES IS HURT FREAKING OUT SINCE THE LAST CHAPTER KDONE.

Oh god, Avery. How did you. Just. I cannot believe she somehow got hurt and took James to the hospital wing. Oh my god. That girl. I love that girl.

As you know... I LOVE that scene. I've read it over a million times. *sighs happily*

I love them just talking. I love when characters just talk to each other. It just says so much about their relationship. *hums happily*

HAHAHA Falcon Cat after graduation. Oh gosh. It's like their child? Hahahahaha LOVE that!!

I let things fall into silence again, her breathing sending the hairs on the back of my neck straight to the ceiling. She needed to stop breathing. Well, on me. It was driving me mad.

JAMES, IF YOU DON'T SNOG THE LIFE OUT OF HER, I SWEAR I WILL kjsfhskdjfhskjfhskjfhs.

Hehe. Man dress.

... good, James, you kissed the top of her head. Now just move down a bit. Right. Almost there...

NO
NO
WHY'D YOU STOP LEANING IN
NONONONONONONO

... but that last line was adorable.

JANICE, YOU'RE KILLING ME, HERE.

LoveloveloveloveloveloveloveloveLOVE. ♥♥♥♥♥♥

(you get all the hearts. ;))

UPDATE SOON :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

All right James, listen up:

YOU. CAN. BE. IN. A. RELATIONSHIP.

People screw up all the time. Especially you. So buck up and deal with the fact that you're going to have to go through a lot of screw ups, and that doesn't mean you and Avery can't be together. Just means you're normal.

Now that that's out of the way...

AW, FRED, YOU'RE ADORABLE. *squishy hug*

Oh, Avery, you're playing dirty. That girl. Honestly. James shouldn't trust himself, but that means one-on-one time is essential! Then he'll give in and do exactly what Avery wanted. AND THEN EVERYONE WILL BE HAPPY YAY!

Again. FRED, YOU'RE SO CUTE. *glomp*

Yes. Avery and Bink are doing this on purpose and you're falling into the trap. JAMES JUST GO SNOG HER ALREADY.

...

See? You didn't snog her, and that's what happened.

You should've listened to me.

;D

Amazing chapter, as always. Can't wait for the next one, I know it's going to be my favourite ♥

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

Oooh, look at me, reviewing as I read. YAAAY!

I just wished she didn't look so miserable playing the game she loved.

^ you just hit home there...

Aww, it's Falcon Cat!! :D Yes, Avery. Thank you. Finally, James has turned the cat into a teacup. Goodness, it only took him forty-seven chapters.

I hope they play laser tag. It'd be awesome. Everyone should gang up on James and he'd get cornered and everybody would make him run laps and Avery would snog him at the end, when the torture is over. Hehe.

OMG. HAHAHA BINK. AW, POOR BINK.

... wait, what just happened? Oh, Rose. You just gained so much respect. Wow. If it was me and I didn't like the guy, I never would've done it... actually, I probably would have. I'd take pity on him. ;D *speaking from my years of experience COUGH*

Oh, sexy Albus. Mmm.

LOL TRAP HER IN A SHOWER. That doesn't sound familiar at all, huh? Oh, James. You're so in love.

... oh god. Rose. You just lost my respect... but that was freaking hilarious, hahahahaha XD

I can sort of relate to James. I mean, imagine if everything I learned about music - everything I worked for, all the scales and performances and recordings and bleeding fingers and sore throats and tears and ripped up songs and words - and it was all gone. I don't know what I'd do with myself, honestly.

...

...

...

Wow.

That scene was incredible. I couldn't even stop to review.

Wow.

...

...

Just wow.

And you know what? It's making me really sad, but I understand. I really do. This, especially:

She turned, looking at me at last. "We were both idiots," she said quietly, her green eyes on my face. "But that's what bloody happens when people don't talk about things or when they hide things or when some stupid girl's stupid father gets in the way." She leaned her body toward me. I didn't move. "I'm not giving up on you. Every day I think about you. I think about what you did to me. How I broke your heart. James, I can't handle it anymore. I want us again."

and

Never before had I heard Avery be so vulnerable. She didn't put down her walls on a regular basis. Not like this.

That was incredible. I'm actually speechless. At both of them. They stopped being so stubborn and now they're finally thinking clearly. Avery is acknowledging the fact that a person can really depend on someone else and what in their relationship went wrong. James is acknowledging the fact that they're not ready to be a couple again - as painful as that truth is.

But I'm still hoping they're going to work it out so that they are ready for a relationship. Really. Because I don't think they could be with anyone else. They're perfect for each other.

"I don't want to be just friends. I'm going to fight for you."

Come on, Avery. It's your turn to fight.

Beautiful chapter. ♥

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

ONE MORE ONE MORE I HOPE THIS WORKS

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

I MISSED 2000TH! THIS IS SO UNFAIR! I AM RAGING. FREAKING. ANGRY.

*butyoumissed1000forycmmsoIguesswe'reeven*
*ahem*

Anyway.

I loved this chapter. It made me super sad and close to tears but I absolutely loved it. I was so wrong to dread it. It was amazing. AMAZING, I TELL YOU!

Avery... you know what I call her (and James). I'm not sure why she's pretending like she doesn't care - maybe it's a coping method? I mean, Emily and Al do the same thing. But maybe she was just too guilty or something, because she definitely cares (hence the tears in her eyes :P)... and god, this isn't doing much for their friendship and always being there for each other.

Albus: he's (fine) second hottest to James. And so adorable. It was so cute how proud James was of his little brother. Heck, I bet everyone was proud. I love how he turned it around on Paloma for their mess, I thought that was hilarious.

Mr. Flynn, you have no heart. I hate you. I'm gonna call my dad tonight and tell him that I love him.

The last scene, as you've already heard, is probably my favourite in some weird and twisted sort of way. Don't get me wrong - that was one of the most heartbreaking scenes I've read on here - but it was so... wow. That's not an adjective, but that's how I'm describing it. You just led up to it so well and how James' dreams just went down the toilet and then how Avery was there /again/, especially when he needed her but she wasn't there for /him/. I'm not even sure why she was there. Was she going to tell him something? Either way... wow. Beautifully heartbreaking. That's all I can say.

I feel so bad for James, and a little for Avery now that she knows what actually happened. Oh, hero's complex. Thanks for screwing us over, huh? :P

James, stop ending up in the hospital wing.

Anyway, amazing chapter ♥ loved it so much!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

NO. NO. NO. NO. NO.

You've already heard my ranting. This is simply not allowed.

I'll cry in the next chapter and then write YCMM. It's a plan.

Love you! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review

AHHH. I'm so glad we found out why Harry was so against James playing Quidditch. That's just about the sweetest thing I've ever heard... aww, Harry. That hero's complex just doesn't go away, does it?

AND NOW THEY'RE ACTUALLY BONDING! Father-son bonding. I miss that with my own dad (except it'd actually be father-daughter, obviously :P), only because I've been away for so long, and now we're at each other's throats. Whoops.

Umm, yeah. AMAZING CHAPTER. Loved it so much!! :) ♥

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the re-post of the original review as you changed pennames! It means a lot to me!

 Report Review