Oh my goodness! One of the best fanfics I've ever read! The perfect length, easy-to-follow, and you made the characters so lovable! Report Review
I thought this was very sweet. I loved Ginny's story. I love that movie, by the way. It's shed light on alot of questions. 10/10
~SxR Report Review
Well, I'm just going through all your stories now, aren't I?
Anyway, very cute, very innocent oneshot. I liked it a lot. The way you portrayed Lily as a little kid with a crush was just adorable, as was your portrayal of Ginny as a child. Good read, indeed! (I'm a poet, and I didn't even know it!)
-Theophaneia Report Review
You look like a Blast-Ended skrewt! hehehehe. Not possible that she would know about them yet, but definitely laugh worthy. Report Review
HAHAHAHHAHA!! OMG i LOVED IT!! IT WAS AMAZING!! you are an AMAZING fan fic author!! it was so funny! hahahhahah!!! omg!! you are one of my fave fan fic authors and this one is of my FAVE fics!!!
Kassandra 466 Report Review
That was super cute! I adored it. Report Review
its really cute, i love it Report Review
It's cute =]
I really enjoyed the idea of it, and the part with Ginny's story.
And the part about liking green eyes.
So basically, I really enjoyed it =]
Good job! Report Review
I don't think this is rushed at all! Actually, i think it is adorable and funny! Like always, your characterization is phenominal. In all of your stories you make the Potters so real and life like. I am really impressed! You're one of my favorite authors on this site, seriously!
Haha, another 10/10, i would have to say. :D Report Review
ROFLMAO!!! HAHAHAHA!!! =)) =D I enjoyed reading it. Pretty cool! And i completely agree - Boys!! *shakes head and then laughs*
moving on to more of your stories.
AdAuthor's Response: Silly boys. I wonder if they ever get better. They must - some manage to get a wife, no? Enjoy the others and thanks for the review! Report Review
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, it was awesome! Great job! And I totally agree with Ginny, boys are stupid. lol 10/10Author's Response: Haha, thank you. They are, indeed. :) Report Review
This was cute! I particularly liked the flashback! It was startling to see how familiar they actually are! And I totally agree that they would be!
I so loved hearing about Harry. I think he would be so protective of her. I love hearing about stories where Lily is young and how Ginny and Harry deal with her and what they are like with her. It's cute and funny!
I really like the echo of Lily in the last bit. I thought i was quite cute as well.
So keen to read more of your work, but I'm off to bed, so I shall read it 2mr! Great work once again! 10/10!Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Ginny and Lily did always seem very similar to me. And poor Harry; first he has to defeat Voldemort; then he gets a daughter like Lily. :) I hope you enjoy everything else. Report Review
ah! i loved it as usual! post a new one soon! 11/10Author's Response: Thank you! :) Hopefully I'll get a chance. Report Review
Awww, that was so cute! Where did you come up with the name Massie?Author's Response: Thank you! She's a character in the clique book series, and I glanced at my shelf and saw it, so I used her name. The Massie in the book is mean, though. :) Report Review
very nice, i rather enjoyed itAuthor's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
Hanging from a flagpole with his pants around his ankles, suspended by his shoelaces! That is sooo funny. Wish I could do that to people. ;-)
This was a really charming, well-written story. I think you put lots of nice touches and details in it that really bring it to life.Author's Response: Haha, I wish I could, too. How useful! Thanks so much for the great review! Report Review
hey, nice story and well written...i dunno about the ages though. 6 is a little young for girls to recognize boys other than playing house (you're the daddy i'm the mommy). unless they're early developing girls...idk. maybe push the age a little later. other than that, good job.Author's Response: My first crush was when I was four. Most of my friends did as well, so that's what that was based off of. :) Thanks for the review. Besides, that is the kind of noticing that little girls do. :) Report Review
hey again ;P
I love this story to as everyone else.
this one was cute.
young love Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, I know, right? Ridiculous. Report Review
Cute. =) +10/10 from me!
--Kate/RPAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! :) Report Review
Omg, that was so cute!!!
Urchin, honestly.Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Haha, I know, right? Report Review
It's a very cute story.Author's Response: Thank you. :) Report Review
Haha, it reminds me of my first love. I was in first grade he was a blonde with brown eyes and named Eric (which is one of my fav names) and I used to chase him around the playground (like the George Strait song, lol.) and... he didnt like me very much. But my mother used to work with his father, so I thought maybe we could have a connection.
It didn't work out.
But it was cute, and Ginny's part had some good shadowing, haha.
And little Lily, always as spunky as ever, poor Harry.
I'll give it a 9!
SavannahAuthor's Response: Haha, see, everyone remembers that first boy! It's ridiculous, I tell you! I trust you're over him now, however, which is always good. Recovery is important in situations like these. I'm glad you liked it! :) Oh, Lillers. Report Review
Adorable. I can't seem to get enough of your Lily. I really liked it, especially how both Ginny and Lily weren't very nice about being said no to. (;Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, they're redheads, aren't they? :) Report Review
This was a great storry, keep up the writtingAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
Yay! So cute. Little boys are so mean! Haha. Poor Lily and poor Ginny. But it all works out in the end, right? Ginny gets Harry and Lily gets Jakers. I LOVE JACOB WOOD. Hehe. This shall conclude yet another of the promised reviews! Fabulous job, I ADORE your writing!
~Alassie~Author's Response: Haha, yes, they ARE. D: High school boys are no better. They insult your drawings and then go make out with your FRIENDS. Anyway, yes, it does work out for them. I love my Jakers more. He is MINE. Just saying. Goodness, I wrote in capitals an alarming amount in this response. Thanks for the review! Report Review
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