This is a really good story so far and I would love to know more.

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hmmm...i know hes really after peter petigrew but...the lightning bolt carvings dont really make sense...or maybe im missing something...10/10

Author's Response: If I can get past the validators, all should become clear. Otherwise head over to SIYE where you can read all of my stories.

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Oooh, very nice! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Next chapter is in, hope you enjoy it.

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Bravo! Much nicer writing style btw, the only problem that I had was the plot... since you pretty much skipped the second book ~ I'm confused :P

So yer saying that Ginny was used by Tom to trick Harry down there... but why didn't Ginny tell Harry about the diary in the first place when she first found and used it?

Author's Response: You have to know Chamber of Secrets, and read my book 2 and use a lot of imagination. Basically, Ginny had the diary. Was taken over by it, but was able to keep everyone safe with a few well placed memory charms, and tried to fight Tom on her own (sound familiar?). She found out after she stole the diary back at Easter that she could not fight him alone, fortunately, Harry had already tried to piece together what was happening. And the rest, they say, is history.

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Nice start. Please continue. Could you, or are you planning to flesh out the back story a bit?
hubris

Author's Response: Back story is covered in part in book 2 (combined with JKR's original) and the next chapter. I've typed up to All Saints Day, and am uploading as fast as I can.

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