I really enjoyed this. It was very well-written Report Review
Wow! That was incredible!
The way you described everything was aboslutly breathtaking, especially the end when Remus was feeling so much guilt, not only with Nessa's death but about Lily, James and Peter. Though I can't imagine "human" Remus to be a murderer, I can understand how the "wolf" could be one, and how much those deaths could weigh upon him. You stayed completely in character and this kept me on the edge of my computer chair the whole time!
Fantastic, lovely job!Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review- it's always so satisfying to get such positive feedback! *hugs* I'm really glad you enjoyed it; I loved writing it :D Report Review
Wow! That was amazing! It was just so intense and I was completely gripped the whole way through. I really love your writing style, and your descriptions in particular were wonderful - I could really picture everything that was going on, and I really felt for Remus, too, because you described his emotions so perfectly. I also thought that the song lyrics fitted in very well and genuinely added something to it - generally I'm not a huge fan of songfics because I often find that the lyrics seem slightly pointless, but here I thought it worked brilliantly! :D
10/10.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved writing this songfic and, coming from you, a response like that means so much!
Thanks again! Report Review
That was so enjoyable! I love your banners they are amazing! I was hoping that perhaps you could show me how to make one, i' am new to the banners and do not have a clue? Anyway much thankful if you could. I've only done one story but would love a banner to go with it!Author's Response: Dude! I would love to! Are you a member on TDA (t h e - d a r k - a r t s . c o m) because they are the leading authority on banners and graphics. If you join up, then comment me on there (LynnHelven, same as on here) then I'd be happy to give you some hints. Also, they have a load of great tutorials that I have found really useful since I started making banners.
If you like, I'll have a go at making a banner for your story, and I'll post the link for it in a review. I'll probably do that tonight or tomorrow.
Anyway, thanks so much for a great review, I'll be happy to help! Any questions, either comment me on the TDA or leave another review for a story with what you want to say (more reviews is always good). Good luck! Report Review
Yay for random songfics! The lyrics to the song were perfect for this. I love the way you kept having the repetition of "the moon, the moon, the moon" and kept having it until Remus finally locked himself away. You know... Nessa should have just left the house. Remus's panic was wonderful, even though he was trying to be calm. The guilt you had him feeling was really well written. At that point in his life, I really could see why he was thinking the world would be better off without him. It's hard to picture him as a murderer, but that could be a reason why he was so quick to resign when he realized what had happened during POA. Excellent job!Author's Response: You know, it did not even occur to me that she could have left! Whoops... ah well, maybe the door was stuck or something. *blush*
Thanks so much, I'm really glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing it, but the validators thought it was too violent so I had to edit out quite a lot :(
Thank you! Report Review
wow, that was such a good story! im liking it!! you got everything spot on, remus' emotions and everything. keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thanks for such a great review, I'm really glad to have such great positive feedback! Thank you! Report Review
Wow. It was really good writing, and I loved the poetry. But that was kinda gruesome.. don't you think? I enjoyed the plot and all the details, and I thought it was pretty intense. I like intense. I was surprised how you ended up changing the original plot though; Sirius betrayed them and Remus killed all his friends? Wow.. I've never heard a story like it. Awesome job.
10/10! :)Author's Response: Thanks very much! It wasn't meant to be like that, it was from Remus' POV when he still thought Sirius was the traitor and he felt responsible for everyone's deaths, even though he wasn't. Gruesome? That's what the validator rejected it for the first few times but I can't see it myself. Perhaps its because I read Stephen King...
Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
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