very well written, i thouroughly enjoyed itAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review!! Im glad you enjoyed it!!! Report Review
Omgosh I'm so sorry, I thought I'd reviewed this already!
Well here I am, once again so sorry but this was beautiful.
i would have never thought of Narcissa at all. She was strong and brave during the final books and you captured her emotions beautifully.
the conversation between Lucius and her was amazing. It felt like real husband in wife fight.
Beautifully done. Excellent emotion. excellent wording.
10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I wanted to convey how much they loved eavh other yet how much Voldemort was taking a toll on that.
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This is so strange. How odd it is to feel for one character and then to sympathise with her assailant.
There is much about this story which i loved, literally, loved. Be it that Lucius drank from a glass which was "abnormally full" or even a short sentence in the manner of "Never this," they all culminated to produce the best of stories. Like, I'm actually going to favourite this.Author's Response: Wow thank you so much!!
I really wanted to portray this as not that Lucius was evil nor Narcissa a victim but of a man who loved his family so much that he was at his breaking point and he lashed out in a way he had never imagined.
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