:) adorable!! so totally cute!!Author's Response: THANKS! ^-^ Report Review
This is great! Maybe u could have them fighting, for exemple, James finding some boy kissing his girlfriend and they fight and break up. But then things would happen and their friends would make plans or things to make them get back together. I hope i could help with this idea but anyway what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Oh dont worry, I'll be sure to wreak havoc on this happy couple's happy--uh--couplement. Though I dont need to point out that they're not under a title yet. They've only admitted their feelings for eachother. I think I can tell you what song I might use next though...
I hate that I love you, by Rihanna ft. Chris Brown.
**LOVE THAT SONG**
if you havnt heard it yet, you should definately check it out. I believe the lyrics portray the L/J relationship rather well
thanks for the review! And I'll take your sugestions into serious consideration.
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Great story!!! The songs fit in perfectly and I really like the story, it's not too cliched or anything. Just make sure that you stay in the same POV (sometimes you write "I" and other times "Lily"), but other than that great job. I can't wait to read more =)Author's Response: yeah...I realized that. I started out the story firmly in Lily's POV because I wanted it like that, I wanted her to be telling the story. But I always reverted back to the 'Lily' and 'she' things. Oh well, I'll go back andfix it when I have time
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his chapter is great however i noticed at the time when they were patroling u would write sometimes in their POV's together with the normal POV. Also u wrote imposible when it should be impossible.
I think the mistery guy is James Potter. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
P.S: Could u check my stories and tell me what do u think of them please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: If the validation thing is telling the truth, the next chapter should be up today.
Thanks for the review!
And when I get the spare time today I'll definately check out your stories. =] Report Review
cute fic. keep up the good work.^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thank you very much!
The next chapter is in the validation queue as I type this. =] Report Review
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