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Review #1, by rosie_sirius93 Truce

27th February 2009:
I think that its great!! I thought you wrote the dialogue really well and Lily's thoughts were classic!

Just one thing, the way you have the sentences cut off halfway and start a new line kinda got confusing!!

Update soon!!

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