Oh, I love it! And poor Scorpius, he's got it bad! So head-over-heels for Rosie and yet the cocky-and-arrogant thing who knows he's hot, etc., etc. It's also great how he readily accepts himself as a Gryffindor yet with Slytherin in him, too.

And your request about Draco and Ron ... I feel the way you painted Draco seems spot-on, mellowed over time and all that, and of course refreshing that he loves and accepts his son as he is. Too many other fics have him as the old mean Draco.

I think in your portrait, he'd be just fine with Rose as DIL. Ron ... I don't know, I'm seeing him as pigheaded, grudge-holding and of course overprotective. Then again ... what we know in canon is him making a half-joking remark about Muggle-loving Granddad Weasley not wanting a pureblood -- any pureblood, not just a Malfoy.

And your writing is just fine, characters are really developing. That suggestion about labeling your POVs is a good one. Oh, and it's "brought," not "brang." But otherwise, you write wonderfully!

Author's Response: thanks so much :)
yes, i wanted scorpius to have some slytherin qualities, growing up surounded by them, plus it's still in his genes.

thanks for tellling me what you thought about draco and ron , they probably wont show up for a while but it's good to know what everyone thinks they should be like.

ahh my writing :P its getting better, ill admit. im checking and rechecking everything now, so i shouldnt have too many more mistakes.

anyways, thanks for reviweing !

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I like this one. I think it's sad that Rose is so worried about her father hating her and Scorpius leaving her though. I like the relationship between Draco and Scorpius, it's nice that he says he'll love him no matter what. Hopefully he stands by that! Awaiting your next update.

Author's Response: thanks so much :)
im glad you like draco and scorpius's relationship.
thanks for the review .

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Humpf
If she wants to be with Liam I'll take Scorpius
Humpf
:)
lol I'm a spazz
Rose and Scorpius forever

Author's Response: lolol,
i am totally with you xD
scorpius over liam any time :P

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OMG
SO EXCITED
SO VERY EXCITED

Author's Response: LOLOL,
thanks ! :)

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I wasss so excited when Scorpius said go out with me :) hehe
sharing a dorm

Author's Response: lolol,
thanks for reviewing :)

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"Im not a nerd. Im academically excited." he stated proudly sitting down.
HAHAHA
hilariousss

Author's Response: haha,
thank you :)

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God you need a LOT of corrections
But, overall, great story!
LOL.

Author's Response: haha, thanks, :)
and yeah, im trying to review the chapter i write carefully, but little things always get skipped so, :P

anyways, thanks for the advice .

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This was an awesome chapter even though it was short. I enjoyed the Rose/Scorpius scene, but Rose really needs to not lead Liam on, not even a little bit. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next! Keep up the amazing work and please update soon! XD

Author's Response: hahah,
i can not assure you that rose will leave liam alone.. ;)
i have liam planned out to be a big bump in the road of the rose/scorpius relationship .
anyways, thanks so much for reviewing !

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it was great so exicted that u updated

Author's Response: thanks so much :)

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I really liked this chapter. chillax about the wait, i've made my readers wait longer. *guilty look*, besides, it's worth it. 10/10!

Author's Response: haha, thanks :)
i try not to make them wait long, cause when chapters for my fav stories arent up fast, i get really mad at the authors , :P
but its not there fault, blame writers block !

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Woho, another chapter! Yeah, it's been a long wait but it was worth it. I loved this chapter and, do I need to say that I love your Scorpius? I'm sorry I can't leave a longer review, I'm late for school! But I just wanted to tell you that I loved this chapter and, well, good job on it! :D

- Cathy

Author's Response: haha, thanks :)
and i know, it was way too long, but im trying to keep up best as i can :)
and i appreciate you taking the time to review my story when your late for school xD
thanks so much,

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I love this story! To be totally honest you have some minor gramatical errors and I felt that this chapter jumped and confused me, but other than those two things it is a great story over all. I have enjoyed reading so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work and please update soon! XD

Author's Response: thanks very much !
and yeah, im working on my writing xD
iv never been good at grammer, but im def trying super hardto try and get it better !
anyways, thanks :)

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ahhh! again with the loving it!?!?! it's factastic. it happened just the way it was supposed to, with the proper hesitation and nervousness! yay!! 1000/10!

Author's Response: thanks ! :)
i love hesitation,
it can be funny, or sad, or happy .
theres just so much you can do with it !


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ahhh! i thought it was perfect! absolutely fantastic! 10/10!

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the pro was fine but could u tell me u is the narrator next. i was so confused. but it was great

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I love the chapter title, to start. And I think they're cute together :)

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i'm hooked
please update soon

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sorry but this reminds me of twilight series? am i sorta right?

Author's Response: umm,
no ?
scorpius isnt a vampire, or any other magical creature, thing.
and rose is not a clutz, or shy girl .
really, its not like twilight at all .

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i really enjoyed this chapter
the unsure ways of rose and scorpius
and the intimacy at the end
can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: thanks :)
i love writing rose and scorpius, because they can be so crazy xD
and totally random if you want.
anyways thanks :)

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It was maybe a little bit short (cause I would have wanted to read more cause I LOVE this story), but it was still great.
This is awesome that finally they kissed properly and Scorp told everything to her... It's just amazing!!!
Just write quickly the next chapter, cause I'm dying to read more:)

Author's Response: lol, thanks so much !!
im so so sorry, but im on vacay and i cant write chapters very fast :(
but i have plenty of ideas, so as soon as i get home, chapters will be coming up quick !

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great chapter
update soon

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I loved it I didn't think it was cliffy at all.

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Aaw!

I... Don't really know what to say, it was really cute, sweet and, oh... Scorpius is the perfect boy, isn't he?

I love this story and I love the way you've written it.
A few spelling errors, nothing major, though "Im" should be "I'm" but that's easily fixed.

Love it, love it love it! :) Can't wait to read more.
10/10 for sure!!!

- Cathy

Author's Response: thanks :)
i love making scorpius out to be who he is :)
i like reading stories where hes all bad ass but i like writing about him when hes sweet .
and ill def make sure to look for those mistakes, thanks for telling me :)
im on vacay now, but im still trying to write, but dont expect another chapter soon,
anyway, thanks so much :)

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great chapter
update soon

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iiloveeiit!!! please post the other chapters asap!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
next chapter comoing up soon ! :)

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