this was soo good
I love how Lily was portrayed.
and Liam was an awesome character.
the plot was good :]
Potential to make it to a novel/novella length story. Even if it
is a one-shot it = 10/10Author's Response: thanks much! you know, I pretty much have a plot and everything for a novella, or at least a short story, but at present lack the time. :( Maybe once I graduate in a few months... Report Review
So cute! is this a prologue to a wonderful story with Lily and Liam?!!! It would make an awesome story in my opinion.I mean who would have thought about Lily falling in love with a non-magical man? That was very cool and so sweet! I positively loved it. 10/10Author's Response: I'd like it to eventually act as prologue (or possilby even chapter of story) but right now, don't have time. Thank you so much for the positive review! You have no idea how uplifting it is. :) Report Review
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