Hey great story bit random but great anyway:).
There were a few really noticeable spelling mistakes, but nothing too distracting.
These were just things that I noticed, but they didn't spoil the story.
Anyway good story :)Author's Response: Hey! Yeah. I know it was a bit random, but I wanted to write something like this, to try it out...
Thank you very much! I will have to get on those mistakes. I swear I spell checked before I posted the story... Oh well. I'm glad they didn't ruin the story though! Thank you for pointing them out!!!
Thanks for the review!
P.S. Harry Potter and The Family Wish will be updated sooon!!!
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I loved it!
-JessieAuthor's Response: Thank you!
I am happy that you love my One-Shot..
Thanks for reading my Fan Fics!!
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That was very well written Megan!
I loved it very much!
See ya at school!
~prongslover13~Author's Response: Thanks Krista!
I'm glad you liked it.
See you tomorrow...
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okay, a VERY random story, lol. But I liked it! Poor Harry =[
there were a few spelling mistakes ["decirve" should be spelt as "deserve"] and there were a few others.
I just have another cc, when he writes in the journal, shouldn't you put it in his style of english, to make it more realistic. But thats up to you.
But it was cool, I liked it =]Author's Response: Hey! Thanks! I know it was very random, but I was very bored!
Yus, poor Harry.
I'll have to fix the spelling mistakes, thanks for pointing them out.
Just a question, what do you mean by "putting it into his English".? I was a bit confuzed.
Thanks for the review!
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this is piper_weasley_24.
this is my sister's account. anyway, i made a banner. if you would like to see it i have uploaded it to photobucket, my username there is piper_weasley_24. let me know what you think of the banner. if you want something different let me know by emailing me at piper_weasley[at]live[dot]com.Author's Response: Hey Piper! I'll look into the banner, and I wil e-mail you and thell you what I think, but I am positive I will LOVE it! And thank you so very much again!
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you said you needed a banner.i would love to make one for you. just let me know by replying to this or emailing me at piper_weasley[at]live[cot]com. i usually reply to email faster, but either way works.
PiperAuthor's Response: Oh! Yes Piper! I would absolutally love a banner! Thank you so much. And, don't worry, I'll mention your name as well one the Summery page!
P.S. I would e-mail you, but my dad has e-mailing blocked without his promission. *Glares* But thank you very much! Report Review
Great story, Naomi. I almost started crying. LOL. I've been very emotional lately, I don't know why. It was really good. I loved it. Who sent him the journal? Sirius? Remus? Dumbledore? LOL. I've been very curious lately as well. LOL.
Talk to you later.
-Padfoot.Author's Response: Hey thanks Padfoot! I'm really happy you reviewed. I'm sorry you started to cry. But It happens to all of us, right?
Um.. I really didn't think who would send the journal, but, really, it would be Remus cause he knows hat Harry is going through, and he feels like Harry needs something to help him. So he sends the journal.
And don't worry! LOL! Everyone is curouis. Haven't you heard? Curiousity killed the cat. *What cat?!*
LOL! Anyways, thanks for the reivew, and I see your e-mail, and I need to answer that now.. but I geuss I am to lazy. ^^ But I will e-mail you back today!
Talk to you later!
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SHORT, BUT AT LEAST IT IS TO THE POINT, AND GREATTLY WRITTEN sry caps not meantAuthor's Response: AW! Thank you very much! I know it's pretty short, but it was a spurre the moment type story, and I wanted to put in up here. I wrote it in mounds of boredom. So, that's why it's short ^^.
Thank you very much for saying it was greatly written. That means alot, and lifts my spirits! ^^
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