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Review #1, by jamielovesdraco Correspondence

9th April 2013:
Please keep posting!!! :3

Author's Response: Hello! I'm glad you like the story. I'll be writing more as soon as I can. I'm sorry about the slow updates, but college keeps me quite busy...I'll post ASAP. Thanks for reviewing!

--Emily


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Review #2, by Jchrissy A Broken Vase

10th February 2013:
Ohh Draco was a nasty little piece of work in this chapter, wasn't he?!

So now you have me all curious. Who really broke the vase, or was it him and he's just lying? Why did he even want Hermione suspicious of him by making the comment about not telling her why he was walking around, at least not yet.

I love all the questions you've set up! It's exactly what a reader needs to have them clicking to the next immediatly (which I would be doing if I didn't have to go wash laundry. Ugh).

Anyway, you ended this on such a perfect note. Let me back up, now...

The Theo Hermione time was really pleasant. I think that they're both going to find a comfortable balance around each other. I really like that you made him nice, but not weirdly sweet. And that you had him ask her why she was so full of herself all the time. I giggle snorted at that one.

I'm really excited to see what sort of friendship develops between them. Theo seems laid back, and I think that's the perfect counterpart to Hermione.

And you again have me guessing... if he's not best friends with Draco, then that's obviously not going to be what gets Hermione and Draco together .. hmm.. you're a sneaky lady, m'dear ;).

This was a really great chapter, Emily! I'll see you soon for the next ♥

Author's Response: Hello again!

I'm so happy you liked this chapter! Draco is quite sneaky, isn't he? And annoying, too. :] But things will change eventually (obviously). I'm really glad you think the questions that are raised will make people interested in the story. That's exactly what I want! And I'm glad you like Theo. :] If you ever visit my Meet the Author page, you'll see my explanation of how I decided on Theo's character. He's my anti-Draco. :] Though, there are spoilers there, so maybe you wouldn't want to read it yet...Anyhow! Thank you so much for reviewing again! I'm so happy you like the story. :D

--Emily


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Review #3, by Jchrissy The Sorting Hat's Warning

4th February 2013:
It's been way too long. Gah. Big hugs and even bigger sorries.

You should be proud of both this chapter and song! I was really excited when you started us off with a bit of drama, and I think you placed everyone's emotions perfectly. The trio era would be so impossible for me to write, but you do such a beautiful job with them.

I like that Hermione sticks up for Draco and the fact that he does have a right to be there. I can't imagine how hard his life was after all the terrible decisions he had to become part of, and even if she doesn't like him yet, the fact that she still understands him as a human just is so . her.

And here you go messing with a perfectly good Hermione and Draco heads cliche!

Only kidding. But I was surprised, I'll admit. I'm excited to see how these two handle working together.

I think this chapter was perfect in terms of starting us out still. We're back at school, we understand where the group stands, we know that Draco has grown up a bit even if the boys don't want to see it... and all that has been done in a way that you incorporated it into the story and didn't make it feel like you were throwing information at us.

I'll be seeing you very soon, m'dear ♥

Oops! I wanted to mention how much I loved Hermione's perceptive nature in this. We never get to see that from her PoV, obviously, and you just did such an awesome job with it. She's forever the watcher, understanding and taking things in. Her character is absolutely awesome so far ♥

Author's Response: Hello, dear!

I was endlessly excited to see that I had a review and I'm so, so happy that it's from you! I'm really glad that you liked this chapter. This story starts off rather slowly because I was desperate not to rush into a relationship between Hermione and Draco, so if you have as much patience as the other people who follow this story, I'll be so happy. :] I'm really glad you like Hermione's character. She's my favorite and I love writing for her. And I'm SO happy you like Draco. It's my goal to make the world love him. I can't wait to see what you think of the other chapters. Thank you so much for all of your compliments and for taking the time to read and review! :D

--Emily


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Review #4, by Dramione813 Pandemonium

7th January 2013:
i love how draco is telling hermione he's innocent first like he doesn't care if no one else believes him just that she believes him!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm quite fond of Draco. He's trying and I think that means something. :] Again, thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

--Emily


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Review #5, by Raya Correspondence

6th January 2013:
Yay! I'm so glad the next chapter is up so quickly!! Ooh things are getting good! Keep up the good work Emily!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Author's Response: Hello! :D Thank you for reading and reviewing again! I'm really glad you liked the chapter. I'll write more soon and hope you'll enjoy that too. :] Thanks again!

--Emily


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Review #6, by Mercedes Correspondence

4th January 2013:
Another great chapter! I'm so excited that they are off to find one of the horcruxes! Well I'm also scared and worried for the Trio but excited too! I'm glad that Draco was able to help and spend time with Hermione because they needed that time together. I can't wait to see more! Thanks for updating so quickly!

Author's Response: Hello!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm really glad you liked the chapter. I'm particularly happy with it, even though it didn't go how I thought it would at all. :] I'll update again soon. Again, thanks!

--Emily


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Review #7, by MadiMalfoy Correspondence

4th January 2013:
Ahhh! Why didn't she tell Draco that her and Theo broke up? Conflict!!! Am I right in guessing that they found the Hufflepuff cup since Hermione sent them the letter mentioning Bellatrix/the Lestranges? Ahh, so good! Update again soon :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm really glad you liked the chapter. She didn't tell Draco she was broken up with Theo because she technically isn't yet. :] They're still together for the time being. But soon! I promise. Don't worry! And you would be correct in guessing which Horcrux they've found. And they have to go get it and destroy it now. I hope you'll read that when it's posted and let me know if you like it. Thanks again!

--Emily


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Review #8, by Raya Frustration and Forgiveness

1st January 2013:
Yay!! I was so happy when the next chapter was up, because before I was afraid that you weren't writing it anymore D: But I saw the new chapter and quickly started reading :D I love that Hermione and Draco are on speaking terms, and that their relationship as more than friends seems to be rolling. I love Theo, he's adorable and the way you've portrayed him made me use him in a LOT of other fanfics! So thanks for that :D But back to the story, I love Theo, but Draco is a much better fit for Hermione. Like she said, it was always Draco that she could count on for ANYTHING and I just think their relationship is super cute. I absolutely loved the last part when they were hugging, I just kept reading it over and over again! You're an incredibly amazing author!! Keep up the good work Emily!! Keep on writing! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hello there!

I'm so happy that you found the story again. I definitely haven't abandoned it. It's just taking me a while to get chapters written. :] I promise more will be up ASAP! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm really happy you like Theo and the rest of the story. And I'm ecstatic that you liked this chapter! Your compliments made my day. Thank you! I hope you'll read and review more when it's posted. I really appreciate your feedback.

--Emily


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Review #9, by MadiMalfoy Frustration and Forgiveness

1st January 2013:
Ahh darn Theo and Hermione are over...but that was bound to happen eventually anyway...but on the Dramione front, things are looking up, yeah? I just hope Theo takes it better once the holidays are up..I have a feeling that something bad is going to happen again after the holidays are over and everyone returns...something worse than burning the Gryffindor common room? Perhaps a student(s) getting injured but not getting Draco? Either way, update this again soon! :D

Author's Response: Hello there!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm really glad you like how the story is going so far! You're right to think that there will be something very dramatic happening in the next few chapters. :] I'm excited and I hope you'll read and review the rest of this story when it's posted. Again, thank you for reviewing! I'll have more up ASAP!

--Emily


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Review #10, by Jamie Frustration and Forgiveness

30th December 2012:
Please write more soon! :3

Author's Response: I will! Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you like the story! :D

--Emily


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Review #11, by patronus_charm Frustration and Forgiveness

30th December 2012:
I read this story a while ago and read it but I forgot the name so I couldn't find it again. So when I rediscovered it today I was so happy as I really love it :D I can't wait for Hemione and Draco to be together as they have such a cute friendship I could totally see them as a couple! Update soon as this story is awesome :D

Author's Response: Hello there! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm in the process of writing the next chapter now. :] I hope you'll read it when it's up. We're getting very close to the breaking point of the plot and rolling into the relationship that's planned between Draco and Hermione. I hope you'll like that! Thanks again for reviewing and I'm glad you found the story again!

--Emily


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Review #12, by Jamie Carnival

30th December 2012:
Please don't kill Theo :c I like him!

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you like Theo! I do too! Don't worry. You'll figure things out soon. :] Thanks again for your feedback. I appreciate it!

--Emily


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Review #13, by tragicYETmagic Frustration and Forgiveness

30th December 2012:
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYA that was so cute.

Goodbye Theo and Hello Draco :)

that's whats going to happen.

Right?

Wonderful chapter, write again soon.

Love Tragic.

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked the chapter! Yes, eventually Draco will take Theo's place. :] That's been the plan all along. Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you'll read more when it's posted. :D

--Emily


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Review #14, by AriesGirl40 Frustration and Forgiveness

30th December 2012:
I'm glad their on speaking terms at last. I've missed this story, welcome back and Happy New Year!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I was relieved that they were talking again too. I missed Draco. :] I'll be posting more ASAP. Thanks again and Happy New Year to you too!

--Emily


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Review #15, by Mercedes Frustration and Forgiveness

30th December 2012:
OMG! I just came across your story about 2 1/2 hours ago and I just finished the lastest chapter you put up today. And I LOVE IT! I noticed you just posted this past chapter but I just am so eager to read onto the story! I love how you're slowly unravelling Draco and Hermione's relationship. It gives them a stronger bond and lets the story get so interesting. And I feel that this story is so realistic! I love it and I can't wait to see more! 10/10 for this chapter and the whole story!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much for this review! You definitely made my night! :D I'm so flattered by all of your compliments and I'm so happy that you like the story. I'll have the next chapter up ASAP, I promise! I love writing this story and can't wait to finish it. It's about 75% done now, I think. :] Should only have about ten more chapters. I'm really happy you like what's posted so far and I hope you'll read on as I post more. Again, thank you so much for you wonderful review. Have a fabulous evening!

--Emily


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Review #16, by Mercedes Frustration and Forgiveness

29th December 2012:
This is a great chapter! You left me on the edge of my seat. You are a very talented writer and this book is just outstanding. I know you just added a new chapter but please hurry! I'm in love with your story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so happy that you like the story! I'll write more soon, I promise. I hope you'll read it and review when it's posted. :] Thank you for all of your compliments and have a fantastic evening!

--Emily


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Review #17, by samantha Healing and Heartbreak

29th December 2012:
You're an incredible writer omg.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing again! I really appreciate it. :] You made my night. Thank you for all your compliments. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

--Emily


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Review #18, by samantha Pandemonium

29th December 2012:
Okay, I'm probably going to write a review on every chapter but wow. It's definitely getting intense!

Author's Response: Thank you again for reviewing! :D I'm really happy that you like the story and I appreciate your feedback so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it!

--Emily


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Review #19, by samantha Carnival

29th December 2012:
Your book is amazing! I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it, Samantha! Let me know how you feel about the rest if you get around to reading it. :D I appreciate your review and thanks again for reading!

--Emily


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Review #20, by Raya Ripples in the Pool

21st November 2012:
You're story is just incredible! I love it so much!!! And I can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'll be writing more ASAP! I'm so happy that you like the story and I appreciate your feedback so much! :D

--Emily


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Review #21, by harryhermionefan7 A Broken Vase

1st November 2012:
Okay, I am writing a review (like anyone's gonna read it! There are so many
already), I quite like it. I am a big harry potter fan and I have read all the books
and I can tell that this is a very good effort."Ochyen' dobroye" in Russian.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I love every single review I receive and I respond to all of them. I appreciate this and I'm so glad that you like the story so far. Thank you for reading! :]

--Emily


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Review #22, by harryhermionefan7 A Predictable Appointment

13th October 2012:
I think it was rather good,
and I will definitly read the next chapter.
However, I was wondering why you disregarded the seventh book, you could have set the story after the seventh book. I suppose if you did the story would not be the same; Harry would have been too big of a celebrity for the story to work.
But anyway, I will now read the next chapter...

Author's Response: Hello there!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! You pointed out the exact reason why this couldn't be after the seventh book. But good suggestion! For this particular story it wouldn't work, but maybe another story sometime. :] Thanks again! I hope you enjoy the rest!

--Emily


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Review #23, by Skrullaloff Pandemonium

27th September 2012:
i can`t believe how mutch i love your story :D

Author's Response: I love your reviews! I'm so glad you like the story! Thanks so much for your feedback! :D

--Emily


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Review #24, by Skrullaloff Hogsmeade

27th September 2012:
NO, he CAN`T die, he is awesome!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you like the story so much! :] Thanks again!

--Emily


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Review #25, by Skrullaloff Carnival

25th September 2012:
cute :) it went a little fast thought, but you are an amazing wrighter

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story so much! Thank you for reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy it. :]

--Emily


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