{reviewid: 2163417, reviewer: 'lizzyjonas98%20%28not%20logged%20in%29'}
| Review #1, by lizzyjonas98 (not logged in) | first day |
14th July 2009:
Hey!!! I have some more time on my hands nowadays so I decided to read on with your story. You have a few grammar and spelling mistakes, so you might want a beta for that!
Otherwise, I don't know if the Trio would be friendly with a third year when there in their sixth. Also, I find some of the characters OOC but I forget which ones... Also it seems very highly unlikely Draco Malfoy would date a third year...
Author's Response: well thanks for checking out my story and i appreciate the review and your opinions
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{reviewid: 2162701, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
14th July 2009:
this is getting interesting. what is Ashley goign to do now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thanks im glad ur liking it... you\\\'ll have to wait and see what happens next! I\\\'ll update after I get James Potter vaidated! thanks for another review!
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{reviewid: 2140366, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
12th June 2009:
another great chapter u have here. things between Ashley and Cordilla aren't good but i hope that with time they will get better. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: i'll update this story as soon as the ques open up again! thanks for another great review tho!
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{reviewid: 2140325, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
12th June 2009:
this is getting interesting. at least i think Ashley and Suzan made up. keep up the good work please.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thanks for all the reviews! you'll have to wait and see what happens between them! im glad ur liking it :D
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{reviewid: 2140318, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
12th June 2009:
i liked when i read about Ashley telling Harry about Suzan. lol.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thanks! i wanted some sort of connection between harry and ashley
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{reviewid: 2140317, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
12th June 2009:
wow! impressive. i wonder what's going to happen now between Ashley and Cordilla.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: yeah sometimes friendship can be complicated
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{reviewid: 2140312, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
12th June 2009:
interesting... i like how u started this chapter. it gives us an explanation of what's going to happen.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thanks im glad u like it!
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{reviewid: 2056001, reviewer: 'yt'}
15th February 2009:
i like it!!! update ASAP!
Author's Response: thank you! I'll update as soon as my other chapter for another story is validated! I'm glad your liking it!
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