Hi TheOtherPotter
It was nice! linking Hermione and Draco from the time of Yule ball was a good idea.
But,
i found that the ending to it was a bit abrupt. I would have liked it even more if u wud have ended it in some other way which would have actually maintained the mood of the story.
Nevertheless,
Well done! It made a good read.
-Aashna

Author's Response: im thinking about adding a second chapter. but i dont know where i want it to go. so i ended it there. we will see what happens. thanks for reading.

TheOtherPotter

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I really like this story. I think it is thouroghly written although, I was quite puzzle with what tense you were using. I don't think they were really ooc, which is something that is hard to find in most Dramiones. Draco is still arrogant and Hermione is still the smart-ass know-it-all.

Author's Response: im glad you liked it. thanks for reading and reviewing

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okay, at first i thought it wass weet but the picture thing is kind of creepy- but i can overlook that- you definitly have to continue...

Author's Response: i will start working on the next chapter soon. i just have to think about where i want to go with it. we shall all find out together...hehe...

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i definitely think you should add more chapters
this story definitely has more potential
i really want to see some romance between draco and hermione lol but thats my opinion >

Author's Response: i will keep that in mind. and seeing as everyone who reviewed thinks i should continue, i should get working on the next chapter shouldn't i...hehe. thanks for reviewing!

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I loved it!!!
i definitely think you should add another chapter

Author's Response: thanks for reading. im glad you like it. i will try to post more soon. i have had a few things going on right now. i will post more as soon as i can.

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please do more that was really really really good. please please

Author's Response: i will try to post more soon. i have had a few things going on right now. i will post more as soon as i can.

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Ooh! I like it. It's got a mystery behind it that's very appealing. I would love to know more...

Author's Response: thanks for reading. i will try to post more soon. i have had a few things going on right now. i will post more as soon as i can.

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that was awesome! i enjoyed this so much. I would love to read more!

Author's Response: i will see how many more people ask for more chapters. i will write more if enough people ask.

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really odd. um... keep going... i'll warm up to it... :) i always do!

with love,
JR Nite Dragon

Author's Response: i will see how many more people ask for more chapters. i will write more if enough people ask.

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i really liked this and would LOVE to see where the story goes if you add more chapters!

Author's Response: if i get enough reviews with people wanting more, then i will continue this story into something longer.

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