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Review #1, by academica My Love

25th May 2011:
What a fantastic story! I always wondered if maybe Remus harbored a feeling or two for Lily. He and Tonks were such a sweet couple, though. Poor Teddy. Anyway, job well done!

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Review #2, by PianoGirl My Love

13th September 2010:
Hi:) Your story is really good. It almost made me cry. And what an incredible idea - Remus and Lily together in their early life! It's sad, that Tonks must have passed away for Remus to find out, that he loved her deeply. Would you mind if I translated this piece of their story into polish? I'd like to show it to some people in my country. If you accept it, of course I'll write, that the writer is you:)

Author's Response: Thank for your review.
You have put a smile on my face.
This was one of my stories that I found enjoyable to complete.
I feel honered that you wish to translate this to show to people and will let you do this.
Lollie :D


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Review #3, by obliviatethemoon My Love

4th February 2009:
wow. that was amazing! im getting all teary... no, just something in my eyes... lol. that was brilliant. i love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review.
I hate it when you get something in your eye and it seems like you're crying...lol.
I'm really happy you loved it.
Now I've got something in my eye lol.
Lollie :D


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Review #4, by emerald_moons My Love

1st February 2009:
Hey! You entered this story into my Subtle Love Challenge, and it does seem to fit quite well. But, as a reviewer, I have some advice for this story. I don't mean to be critical, just seeing things that might turn people away from your wonderful story.
Your spacing is can make the story had to read. For example:

"We meet again, James Potter."
"You're unworthy to speak my name, Voldemort."
"You would have made a fine deatheater."
"I'd rather die than be one of your mindless morons."
"That can be arranged." Voldemort raised his wand.
"Avada Kedavra-"

Is rather messy. Try:

"We meet again, James Potter." He whispered sickly, a smile on his face.

James stood tall, narrowing his eyes, "You're unworthy to speak my name, Voldemort."

"You would have made a fine deatheater."

"I'd rather die than be one of your mindless morons." James stated defiantly.

"That can be arranged." Voldemort raised his wand, preparing to strike.

"Avada Kedavra-"

Well, not as bad as that, but something along those lines, to bring the readers into the story and enjoy it even more.
But this is very good! With a few adjustments, it would be completely excellent. :D

~emmy

Author's Response: Thanks heaps for your review.
I'm glad it fit your compition.
I'll go through and make changes like you have suggested tomorrow.
I like people telling me what I can improve on. It certainly helps me as a writer.

Lollie :D


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Review #5, by Veela_is_me My Love

31st January 2009:
wow i loved it :)
it was sad i thought i was going to cry :(
i think you should write like a sequal one-shot, for what happens in heaven or something like that :) just a suggestion :)
you did good :)
Veela_is_me

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, Veela.

When I heard the song, I felt sad and the story just rolled into my head.
As I was writing it, I really felt I needed to add the emotion to it and I guess I acheieved that.

A sequel? I'm not sure about that. If the inspiration hits me or I get a really good idea, I might. This story was meant to be a stand alone, but if I do write a sequel, i'll dedicate it to you 'coz if you hadn't of suggested, I would never have considered writing one.

Lollie :D


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