Why the cliffhanger? Every author jsut loves those, right? Well, anyway, this was great, and I'm really confused on a lot of things. Can't wait for more. I like Ryder.

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I really like this chapter. I can tell this story's gonna be mysterious, and you have to think about everything. Actually, I like Ryder. Her attitude does seems bitchy, but i think Siruis must've done something to her to make her like that. And the beginning. Perfect. It really amde me wanna read this story,a mnd now I'm dying for more. It's like an addiction. Wonderful so far. I just have one problem. I mean, it's not really a problem, more like a. something I wanna know. Is there a reason you write in the present, instead of the apst. Like instead of you saying "I bit my lip," you write, "I bite my lip." Is that your writing style? I respect it if it is, but I'm always use to writing in the past. Just asking. This was still awesome! Thanks!

Author's Response: thank you!! I'm glad you like Ryder, her personality is so complex and it is because of fifth year... haha and i'm happy you're addicted! Exactly what I want, just kidding! I guess I do write like that when I'm writing in first person... but I changed the story to third so it's written in the past. Weird, I never noticed it before! haha thanks for the wonderful review!

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I've learned that the girls are always bitchy for a reason. I'm loving the start

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o i like the mysterious-ness of this story :)
cant wait to read more!
xxcharm

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Loved it! fantastic start, i lovee ryder, sure she sounds sorta like a bitch but i love it! ohh what happend in fifth year..man im really excited! update really soon

Author's Response: haha she is a bitch but there's more underneath ;-) fifth year was a huge year for her! Updates coming soon, keep reading :)

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Oo intrigue. It's really good so far, even if Ryder is a tad frigid. I'm sure she'll loosen up. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thank you!! she'll become herself soon, thanks for the review and keep reading :)

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Hm I'm intrigued with this story. Ryder does seem kind of mean, but I'm interested in how she got this way. Especially since it alludes to having to do with Sirius. Can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you are :) There is definitely a reason and it definitely has to do with Sirius! haha updates coming soon!

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