I really love this story. Now i want to dance in the rain Report Review
Beautiful story. So good Report Review
I've been enjoying reading this book and it's sequel. This chapter, however, seemed a bit choppy. Take your time and relax into your writing because when you do, it ends up very well. Report Review
one word:AWESOMESAUCEMEAGFOXYCOOLIOHOT hehehheheh but really this was well re read the top bit lol :DAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you loved it! Report Review
Hee hee, Fred and Hermione... I also love when Malfoy gets punched!Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a review! Your feedback is greatly appreciated! :) Report Review
I did like it! But the flashback kind of went forward in time not back...Author's Response: Ohh you've noticed a flaw in my writing that I never noticed until now. I did not write it clearly enough, but the current time in the chapter is several weeks into the school year, not three days into the school year as the flashback states. I probably should fix that. Hopefully that clears things up a bit! Thanks for pointing it out! Report Review
This story was super cute Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D x a million. This is me right now. THAT. STORY. WAS. BLOODY. AWESOME! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Report Review
*GASP!* Ok, I am officially in love with this story! I really like the things she said because they are really expressive. Keep writing! Report Review
! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love it! (MORE!) Report Review
A W W W W W W W ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Report Review
I LOOOVE IT!!! I know I've already said that, but I'm saying it again. Get over it. Since I am a very random person, have you ever heard the song 'Don't Want An Ending' by Sam Tsui? It's really good!!! (Sorry, I'm listening to it right now. Back to your story!) I love all the funny bits, but I REALLY like George's reaction to her boggart and the sweet scene of her falling asleep in his arms. AWWW! And I like that he ws awake when she didn't leave. Report Review
Hee hee hee hee hee hee hee... I love George. I'm totally stealing him from Beth. Report Review
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Mad Hermione is funny. Also, only Luna would skip down the corridor, not find anything wrong with the fact that one of her friends has another friend in the fireman's carry, and then hope that they'll have pudding at breakfast. Gotta love her! Report Review
Ok, I absolutely LOVED this chapter, especially the 'dancing in the Great Hall whilst completely covered in mud' part. I dance in the rain too. It just feels so PURE in the rain. I love it. Report Review
Agreed.! I adore this chapter too.!
Its like someone just took my dreams and wrote em down here.!
Its amazing so far.!
Truely Rawrsome.!Author's Response: This story was, no joke, inspired by a dream that I had. I'm so glad you love it so far! :) Report Review
heya, just wanted to let you know that I loved this! This is the best story I've read so far. I'm a huge fan of the weasley twins, Fred it my favorite and I love that even though this was a romance with George, you included Fred too. Most fanfics on the twins that include romance usually just pick one and forget about the other one, but I think you played it out perfectly. So thank you for writing this, I couldn't stop reading this. I saw your stories from your newest one earlier today while I was searching stories on the twins and it was really good so I went to see if you wrote anymore stories on them and I found this :D I really hope you decide to write more stories on the twins. Your stories are amazing :DAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! Reviews like these keep me going! Report Review
Very good story! I loved it!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
I just had to leave a review, I'm pretty sure I put up like ages ago this as one of my fave stories.
Anyway it was a lovely story, really lighthearted.
I thought though that you incorporated your story into J.K Rowling's story exceptionally well. The patience to get the plot right and I even recognised some of the lines from her books and the films, that takes great patience.
I think anybody that can finish a story deserves to be credited, that is where most writers fall down and yours certainly deserves credit.
So anyway, well done really. Keep writing!Author's Response: Ahh thank you so much! I absolutely love getting feedback like this. It makes writing these stories totally worthwhile. I'm glad you liked it so much and thank you for the review! :D Report Review
I love this Story!! Its so good!!! You are an amazing author keep up the good work!!!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Make sure you check out the sequel! Report Review
Brilliant story! I enjoyed every moment of it! It was like a rollercoaster ride! I LOVED IT!Author's Response: Ahh, I'm glad you liked it so much! Report Review
awesome, awesome, awesome, AWESOME!! story!! :) i just LOVED reading the whole story !!! it was so wonderfully written! will there be a sequel? plz do write one!Author's Response: hahah yes. There's a sequel. No worries. =) Report Review
Wow!! I really like this series!!! It was quite amazing!!! Hope the sequal is just as good!Author's Response: I hope I don't disappoint. Report Review
Loved it! can't wait to read the sequel!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
OH MY GODD. cliif-hangerrr. i NEED to see wah happens next!!! update quicklyy. they better get back together! cant wiat/ update update updateAuthor's Response: All in good time, all in good time. :) Report Review
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