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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ParadoxTremors

8th May 2009:

Like the ending. Believabile and touching. Everything seems to be falling into a perfect order for Harry--that's when trouble usually hits. I'm enjoying this very much. Keep up the good writing my friend.

Author's Response: Thank you the next chapter is coming soon.

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Review #2, by Rayb008

Chapter 1

19th March 2009:

Hey I like where this is going !

Author's Response: Thanx the a few new chapters to be posted soon.

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Review #3, by ParadoxTremors

Chapter 1

23rd February 2009:

I enjoyed the twist and turn you've added to the story. I always felt ist kinda strange his aunt wasn't a witch. A job well done. Look frward to reading more my friend.

Author's Response: Thanx. It was my wife's idea about her being a witch and I went with it. next Chapter coming soon.

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Review #4, by nickie02

Chapter 1

3rd February 2009:

I like the concept of the story and I think that you will be able to do a lot with this story.

I did want to point out some grammatical errors, you should probably proof read your work. You have words in the wrong place and therefore sentences that don't make sence. I am just trying to be helpful considering this is your first story.

Author's Response: Thanks I will do that.

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