not enough romance for me, wont be reading anymore, but keep writing for the ppl that do like it!! and good characterization (how ever u spell that) Report Review
It's good, but try to get the spelling right. Keep writing! Report Review
brilliant so far! I absolutely love it!
Just a few tips:
I don't think that Dumbledore would give in that easy
and who is Rebus Lupine? remus Lupin probably.
I love this story, and i think that you've captured the character's personalitys really well. i'll be looking out for the next chapter. :) Report Review
This story is fantastic. Am I sensing something between Harry and Hermione? It is really good update soon!! Report Review
dissappeareted? try disapparated! and apparate, apparated Report Review
May I ask who Rebus Lupine is? Did you mean Remus Lupin, the werewolf? Please, check your books. Learn how to spell.
sorry, the evil little state spelling champ is kickin' in
looks good, update soon Report Review
If only you could make it Harry-Hermione I would be sooooo happy. Ahhhh..... Anyways, I was just expressing my wish so thats all..... Report Review
GREAT, GREAT, GREAT!!! Absolutely entertaining! Please update fast--and I mean, VERY fast!!!!! Report Review
that was good can't what to next chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for your reveiw! I really appreciate it! the next chapter will be up ASAP Report Review
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