If I'd been Rose I would have been fuming at Scorp for those remarks. But he handled the situation in a gentlemenly way which I could not help but chuckle at. Another 10/10 and to move on.

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Excellently written. A great start to this interesting story. I really must move on so 10/10 for this chapter and onto the next one.

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I'm horrible about reviewing indivdual chapters so, the story as a whole is terrific. I love Rose/Scorpius, it's as close as we'll ever get to Draco/Hermione. (sniff) This is one of my new favs!

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the art of seduction while on a broom?!
I love that line. It made me laught so hard :D

I really like Scorpius in your story. He's so... different from the stories I read so far on the site.

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This was such an awesome epilogue, I love Ron's reaction to the ring lol.

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This is really awesome...I like it, it's very simple light reading but that's good.

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I must look a bit weird, on the computer in my uni library with a big goofy smile on my face - but this chapter really did make me smile! The dialogue is really unrealistic - not that it's a problem for me, but if you want to work on that, try speaking it outloud to see if it sounds natural. (VERY minor issue - the stories awesomeness and fun fluffiness overcome it).

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I could so picture the cheers errupting aorund them as they kissed...it's such a cute image :)

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Aww holding hands!! I loove it!

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Scorpius' attempts to woo Rose are so over-the-top and hilarious. How can she possibly resist him? I love that you put so much thought into Quidditch players, etc. I'm writing a quidditch-centric fic and I know how hard it is to keep track of those.

Author's Response: Thank you! I wish I could play Quidditch... I suppose I could be one of those people running around with a broom between their legs at the uni... Lol. :) Cheers!

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Yay I love all the fluffiness!!!

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This was quite good, very fast-paced. You could slow it down and add more detail, because it doens't flow very well, it's rather choppy. That being said, I love this kind of story because it gets right to the good stuff without being all wishy washy. Fluffiness is lovely.

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Fantastic! They are so sweet together! I want my own Scorpius to think of me and give me a rose for every thought!

Author's Response: I know, right?!?

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i know this has nothing to do with the story really, but your disclaimers that you aren't JKR make me LOL every time :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! I am not much of a writer, it is just a fun hobby, so I am always cheered when I can bring a smile to someone's face. :)

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Scorpius is such a strong character! I just hope Rose comes out to be as strong as a character as him :)

Author's Response: I am so happy people are still reading this story and enjoying it! I am still, STILL, working on a short sequel... I hope to finish it this summer and post it. We shall see. Happy reading!

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This is sooo cute :) I love Rose/Scorpius stories so much! Well done!
-flips to next chapter-

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

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loved it, thanks!
im hoping that the sequel will follow up soon... ;)

Author's Response: Hi! I am amazed someone still reads my stories, I am so bad at updating! I am working on a sequel, but I am writing the whole thing before I post it (then there are no excuses to wait with posting, lol).

After the queue reopens, I will be posting more for "Stolen," which I want to post in its entirety before posting this sequel.

Stay tuned! Thanks for your review. :)

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I totally loled at Must. Not. Lose. Malfoy. Cool.
That was priceless.
But since when did Malfoy's have their own cool ?

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for reviewing! I personally think Malfoys are always cool... :)

I am glad you are reading this story, and I do still have a sequel planned for it... I just have to finish my Dramione story first (I have learned my lesson and can now only manage to work on one story at a time due to time constraints, blah blah blah). So... maybe a sequel will be up around the Hols! :)



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YAY! I loved this story! It was so cute and fluffy. Haha. I eagerly await the sequel. :> *clicks 'Add to Favorites'*

Author's Response: Thank you! I am such a bad author... I have let real life get the best of me lately and my muse has slipped away... hopefully he comes back soon and I can write again...

Cheers!

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Haha I liked the idea of a rose appearing every time Scorpius thought of Rose. Wow. @-) Apparently he thinks of her hundreds of times everyday. CUTE! XD

This is a very cute story! I'll be sure to read more of your work. Keep up the good work!
I shall get on to the next chapter now. :D

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much for your kind words!

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I adore this, though it does sound a tad too formal to be realistic. But other than that, it's a good story.
Much love!

Author's Response: Too formal, eh? I will have to work on that in the future! English is my second language, so I tend to be a bit formal myself in speaking. :) Thanks for the review.

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That was very good, thank you for writing it, I loved it :D
I think you captured Ron, Hermione and Rose's character's well.
x

Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this story, and hope to continue writing more with these characters soon. :)

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hey. I just finished reading this and let me tell you it's awesome. I'll be looking forward for a sequel too. I loved the way things turned out. Rose/Scorpius rock!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am dealing with real life issues at the moment, but a sequel is still the plan. :)

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that is just tooo cute! :) it was nice; short and sweet! i very much enjoyed it! gotta love ron's reactions to everything! :D

awesome job yea.

Author's Response: Thank you! I cannot wait until I have time to post again, there will be a sequel to this story sometime this summer so stay tuned! :)

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Rofl. That was funny.

And sweet.

Absoloutly loved it.

Xx.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the read and review! I hope to get back into writing here shortly, it will be a busy summer but writing relaxes me. :)

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