good so far, cant wait to see what happens next so please update when you can thanks

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Oh I loved this chapter!!! And i see that you did the spaces :) so guess i didn't have to tell you, lol. Your spelling and punctuation was absolutely GREAT in this chapter!!! update soon, please!

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Hey! nice chapter. and you were correct on the Horton Hears A Who line! YAY! first person! lol. I noticed in this chapter that there were a few, not many, just a couple, spelling errors and the punctuation, sometimes you didn't have any. And inbetwen lines, you might want to add an extra space, i've noticed that it makes my stories look less sloppy so i went back and redid the chapters i had up :) sorry if i offended you in any way, i didn't mean to. Keep your head up! ~Kat

Author's Response: Nope you didn't offend thanks and keep reading I'll try to work on it thanks for your review

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"What a jackass!" My words exactly! "I don't even know why I'm dating you"? I'll say it again. What a jerk! Whoo! You go girl, Hermione! I loved what Harry said to Chad! I thought he was going to hit him! I loved the baby conversation, it was funny! Please keep going!

Author's Response: Haha it was hard not to laugh while writing the baby conversation but i'm glad you like it! I have about 7 chap. written but it depends if i have anytime to type! LOL Thanks for the review

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First I would hate to feel like Hermione does. I wouldn't know what to do. Chad's cheating?! Dang! Not the kind of guy I would want. I see, like me, you like seeing Ron and Luna together. To me, they look good together. If Chad is really cheating, I don't believe him for a second. And the lipstick? Saying he was messing around, yeah right! What a jerk! Great work!

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that was fgood m8 thanx for adding me as yore favourite author keep reading updateing regulary

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