I actually created an account on here so that I could follow this story and tell you how great you are doing! I absolutely love it! Report Review
Ah, I hope you get over the writers block/plot block. I liked this chapter a lot, although I'm upset at the way Chloe is treating Alex!Author's Response: Me too! I guess I just have to figure out where I want the story to go lol.
I'm glad you liked the chapter! I know this one didn't get the positive reviews/vibe like the others lol. I don't plan on writing any chapters with fights like that in the future - so far as I know, that'll be the only one. :)
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wvautocorrect :-P i cant really understand much of it but from i could, it seems like chloe is suddenly a bitch? i used to love her fireyness. but now i cant stand her , sorry i didn't like this twisg :-(Author's Response: You're not obligated to love my story - it's okay. :)
Chloe is and isn't . . . it'll get explained and sorted out so you'll understand the fight better. Thank you so much for the honesty!! :) Report Review
OH MY GOODNESS! I loved Alex and Remus.. wish I was Alex...Or Chloe.. mostly Alex.. ;) Anyways, thought I'd let you know that I just read your full story in one shot. Literally. I enjoyed It that much. Except, when Sirius and Chloe were kissing, she should've smacked him.. just for fun! :) GREAT JOBAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you like my story so much.
And that isn't a bad idea . . . she is rather feisty isn't she? Lol.
I hope you continue to read! Report Review
Thank you for another entertaining chapter, interventions are always lovely. I must say you have got me completely hooked on this story. :)
I like that your writing is rather simple (this is a compliment) which makes it easier to feel with your lovely characters. You have got characters like Chloe whom you can not help but love from the moment she falls down from that tree and then you have the characters that just grow on you. Terryn especially has made me positively surprised even though I have never liked the idea of a fifth marauder; she somehow manages to fit in. Perhaps itís because she is more mum/big sister than she is marauder?
Looking forward to your next update.Author's Response: Thank you Amanda! I used to write stories with a ton of big words, and after a while I felt like I was coming off more stuffy than anything lol. I'm glad simplicity isn't bad. :)
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Eek! At last! Love this.Author's Response: :D
I love that you love this! It makes me happy to know people are enjoying my story.
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I really liked this chapter, but then I've liked every chapter so far. I love drunk Sirius! Also, yay for Remus and Alex, they are so sweet together, when's it going to happen??!Author's Response: Me too! I wish I could have had more dialogue but it didn't occur to me to let Sirius have a bigger part in the chapter.
I'd love to tell you! But just read the next chapter, and I think you'll find that you'll get your answer. :D Report Review
You got the law right for the muggle world, but I think the wizarding world is 17 flat to do anything (Dumbledore gives Harry some sort of alcohol in HBP)
Anyway, great chapter as usual :)Author's Response: Thank you! I completely forgot about that - just shows how long it's been since I've read the books lol. Report Review
No. Freakin. Way. You did not just do that! Your so mean! Ergh, now I'm angry.Author's Response: *cowers*
Don't worry - it won't last long! Report Review
Aww it's sad but beautifully written as usual. I'm glad Chloe finally admitted her feelings though! Can't wait for more.Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, she's finally admitted there is something there, but she's got a ways to go to accepting those feelings. Report Review
Awww! No! That's so sad!Author's Response: Don't worry! Lily can't be stupid forever right? Report Review
I love this story sooo much! I can't wait for more :)Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you love it, and I'll make sure to get it all up as fast as I can. :) Report Review
Yay again! I knew that would happen. I love it! Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you! Chloe and Sirius have quite the electricity don't they? :) Report Review
Yay! That was so awesome! I love Remus. But sometimes, hes so stupid.Author's Response: Isn't he just? :) I love him too. Report Review
;) Like! Write more, write more!!Author's Response: I will! My homework is suffering - and the hubby is getting frustrated with me (make that extremely frustrated) lol. Thank you!! Report Review
I loved it! I've read many fics about how lily and James got together, but this is by far my favorite. It's beautiful. I loved it. Can't wait for more! I'll be waiting.Author's Response: Wow thank you so much!! :) I'm really glad you liked it. I'll be posting up as fast as validation will allow me. Thank you again!! Report Review
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :D Report Review
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YAY!!! I'm so happy!! So wonderfully content!! So probably should be in bed, but stayed up reading your newest chapter!!
Firstly: I can't stop laughing at the thought of Lily beating James with her shoe.
Secondly: Chloe is amazingly stubborn. I LIKE IT!!
Thirdly: Teryn!! I saw it and I was like: OMG!!! So excited!!
haha, so anyways, I'm glad you finally decided to continue. Update soon, dang it, or I will... do something horrible! :DAuthor's Response: We will definitely try to post chapters as quickly as possible... Since life seems to be very crazy lately! lol. Report Review
This story rocks! Please write more soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'll definitely do my best. Report Review
What can I say? I LOVE this chapter. Your writing is magnificent.
And I have to say if you don't write more soon, I will have to eat for first-born child. Really.
Loves and stuff. Author's Response: :P
Lol. And thanks Danae. I always love to hear such wonderful praise about my writing. But I'm not too worried about your threat: I don't plan on having children. :D No worries, the next chapter is due in *checks watch* less than a week. :D Report Review
Haha. I simply loved this!
I think the first part was a little too heavy, I think some of it could have been cut off, making it a bit more catching.
But the last part was simply splendid! I love Chloe. She's a typical bad tempered girl who just seems to have had a bad day, maybe a few of them. She's angry, but not loosing it, screaming and stuff. And Sirius seemed like an arrogant prat.There is no other word. Their tree and ground, yeah, right. And he's perfectly cool, catching the shoe just in time, and keeping the smile. He's got a very cool facade, very calm, and I like that! There is a fine balance between action and dialogue, which I find pretty perfect.
Very good indeed!Author's Response: Yes, I wasn't too satisfied with the beginning myself, but I tried not to jump into the action part too soon. Still, I'm glad it didn't completely throw you off the story. :D
Ah, Chloe. A bad day indeed, and all she wanted to do was read her book. And Sirius, he's so cool I just want to wipe the smirk off his face. :D But, I'm the author, so I can't, yet. But frankly, I don't know who wouldn't fall in love with him, prat or not. :D You saw them just how they were meant to be seen, and I'm glad you like them, all in all.
Thank you so much for this review. If I could, I'd ask for reviews like this all the time. :D Report Review
Most wonderful!!! :D Loved it more the third time!! Continue publishing or I will feel the need to eat you!Author's Response: *eyes widen in fear*
Well. At least I'll taste like brownies . . . :D Report Review
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