Ah this story is amazing! Loving the sexual tension and avoidance of feelings! Update quickly after the break! Happy holidays :) Report Review
Nice to see you're still alive! :) Report Review
I cant believe i missed this update!! i was waiting for so long and just decided to re read your story again and what do i find?! a new chapter!!! so stoked! Please update soon, i absolutely love this story!! I am hoping she didnt sleep with Dan though. and also hoping that scorp makes some big deal out of telling sadie and lena that he loves rose :) Report Review
This is my new favorite story!! I freaking love it! :) write more soon, like very soon, yeah? :)Author's Response: I will, I promise! Wow, your favorite story? That's awesome!
Nice to see you again :) so... whats this story about again? lol Just a tease.
I thought the chapter was funny. Everyone dareing each other that was fun.
I just have to say, I don't think think Rose will go through with it, she might be all full of courage now, but I don't think she will.
see you next chapter! :)Author's Response: Oohh haha :P Well, I guess we shall have to see, won't we? Hoping to finish up the next chapter and send it out next week! Report Review
I actually loved the cuteness, and I would not
Ind if it was amped up a little bit. But I love the story line so far and I like both Rose's and Scorpius's voices in the novel.Author's Response: Thanks so much! Do not worry, it will definitely amp up once you get further along! Report Review
You haven't updated in awhile, just wanna make sure you're still alive.Author's Response: Haha soorry I'm alive! I just took a bit of an hiatus it would seem... I'm updating today or tomorrow! Report Review
i love this story. do you know when the next chapter will be up i can not wait please update son!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm updating now! Report Review
Awesome chapter! you have such gr8 skill @ thix writing thing. anyways some suggestions: lena and james together plz and break up rose and dan. i hate them tgther.also get scorp and rose together. ps have i told you how awxum you are!well itx true!!!Keep on rocking(and writing)!Author's Response: You don't want Dan and Rose to stay together? But they're so perfect for one another! (I kid of course. They are a train wreck) Thank you so much! This was a gr8 review! Lol so you want Lena and James together hmmm? Perhaps, perhaps... I guess we shall have to see ;) Report Review
I LOVE YOUR STORY! please update soon?! your amazing!! xxAuthor's Response: Thanks! I definitely have not updated soon, but hopefully it will come out in the next couple days! Report Review
I'm so excited for James' party! Its going to be amazing the read! Thank you for updating.
Update again soon!
-BrookeAuthor's Response: Thanks! I HOPE that it's an amazing read! So far it's realy rough, so I'm currently in the process of tweaking the entire thing. I want to make sure that it lives up to everyone's hopes! Report Review
LOVE the story, keep it up!
Maybe some drunk Rose and Scorpius action next chapter?
That would be hilarious!!Author's Response: Ummm... NO... Don't be ridiculous... Cough, cough. Spoiler? Maybe! Or is it? ;) Report Review
Ah this is actually one of the best fan fics i have ever read and I am really picky! Please write more soon I really wanna know what happens!Author's Response: Wow, this is awesome! I really appreciate you reading and reviewing my story! I hope that it continues to live up to your standards! Report Review
K so im literally in love with your story. I am SO happy I found you! You write these characters with just the right amount of teen angst to keep them relatable (as much as wizards can be anyways(: hahah) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I repeat, I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! xx please continue!!! xAuthor's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate such high praise! This is a really awesome review :) I'm about half way through writing the next chapter, so it will hopefully be out soon! Report Review
Wow, I just started reading your story last night. I must say bravo. I can't wait for the next update, because I'm hooked. Hooked I tell you. I'm giving this a 10/10 for sheer awesome fun time. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate that a lot! You're a 10/10 reviewer in my book! Report Review
Kind of boring. :o But I am super excited for next chapter! Thank you for posting, it just made my day!! :)Author's Response: Haha thaaanks I really appreciate that one ;) and yes! I'm working on it!
Oh my gosh I love this! Must have more Scorose and fast! Hurry up and right more, I'll be waiting!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm hurrying as fast as I can!
I freaking love your writing so much! You need to write faster so that all the people that love your work can read more! It's so addicting!Author's Response: Thank you! I really am trying, I just have had a lot of problems the last few months :/ I have spring break now, so I'm hoping to post one chapter and write another! fingers crossed! thanks for the review! Report Review
Here is a reviewww. :) Now, go write! Please, I'm dying! But I do love your story and hope you continue with it and hurry it up!Author's Response: I wrote! I swear! It's going in the queue within the next day! Report Review
Sounds like you had writing 101, I had it last semester, easy A. The stories were short enough. 102, same deal, just read and write and talk about what you read and wrote. hope your studying to become an engineer, you'll have NO problem finding a job once your finished. Trust me, do the time now while your mind is in the game, wait till later in life, you have no choice but to work harder for that A.
I just finished reading your whole story, aside from the spelling mistakes, I think your mind goes dyslexic after writing on a roll. I've been known to do the same thing. Thats it, only thing I can say is that you might want to go thru it later and fix.
You have done a wonderful job with this story. You went thru each person in turn at different ages thru the whole thing, they acted their age. I thought that was awesome. Even when puberty hit, you could smell the hormones in the air lol You did well at keeping the readers attention. You were witty, fun and caring. I adored your sense of humor thru the story, Hogwarts should be fun.
well, enough for now. I'm off to bed, school first thing ya know...
Till next chapter I say, Well Done!Author's Response: It was English 356 actually... Teaching Young Adult literature. The books were good and everything but a lot of reading! I was excited to read a book of my own volition after the quarter had ended lol Thank you so much for the review! I have horrible spelling I'll admit. I'm actually hoping that a miracle will occur and I will automatically become a beast at it, however I don't think it will happen :/ Alas! Thanks again! Report Review
Very entertaining and well written, the last paragraph made me laugh alot, got the family's attention. :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Or else.Author's Response: Ooookay I actually got a little scared there... I'll get to work ;)
Apparently intimidation works on me lol Thanks for the review! Report Review
update soon love this story cant wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you! The chapter is going up asap! Report Review
Awesome chapter :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
LOVED this chapter!!! please update quickly!!Author's Response: Thank you! I will be updating as soon as I write one or two more pages :) Report Review
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