Oh the sexual tension is unbearable! Great story, keep on writing!
PleAse can Fred and Liv snog now? ;) pretty please?Author's Response: eager little reviewers, you are;) Report Review
I was scrolling through the reviews, and it starts I April and u just keep saying that you will update next month, and I understand you have a school thing, but I wouldn't be mad if this story wasn't good!!! it truly is amazing, and hilarious, and I just wish you'd update! i'm really sorry if i'm being mean though...Author's Response: no i understand why you would be a bit disappointed, and you have every right to be, but i don't want to force out bad chapters, you know? sometimes the mojo gets lost for a while, and then it comes back. it's just that i feel like if i give one fic too much attention then everyone else badgers me about all the others. this fandom isn't my number one anymore but believe me when i say i will update! i just really wanna finish L&B and then i'll get to it.
i'm sorry to keep you waiting all the time! :[ Report Review
I think it's really cute so far!! And definitely funny, which makes it all the better. I like all the little romances and how all the characters are complex. I have mixed feelings about Fred. I like him a LOT, really, but I can't really get over the fact that he called her plain! Or basically boring! How awful is that? And if he really sees her that way, how can he like her? He just likes her potential? Or what? Maybe you can expand on that later on and show us what he likes about her? Maybe once they're together or almost together...
Another thing I wasn't sure about was the whole scavenger hunt groups business. Lee told Liv that someone specifically asked to be in her group. And that was obviously Fred, because George wouldn't do that. (Unless it was George doing it FOR Fred). And she remembered Lee saying that. She said Lee's words kept running through her head. So at this point...she does know that Fred likes her, right? And is it now just a question of how genuine he is and how she feels about him?
Because it still sort of seems like she's surprised at any clue that he may like her. But maybe that's just me.
I'm looking forward to seeing her and Sofia's plan out into action! Though I do kind of hope Liv plans something devious against Fred later on as well. A little payback for calling her plain. ;)
Update soon!Author's Response: oh i will definitely expand! i do have alot of ideas for this fic and fred isn't that much of an idiot, i know some things he says are rude but it's all for the plot lol.
as for the group business, i think that in the teenage world it's all very confusing so she really doesn't understand what or how or why ANYTHING happens with fred when she's around him. she of course is still confused about him called her out on being a wet blanket so she questions that idea, maybe likes the idea of fred liking her, but she doesn't really understand it ;P Report Review
I love this:D it is well written and feel that it captures Fred's character really well:) please update soonAuthor's Response: omg that's a huge compliment i feel like the brain of fred weasley is hard to capture so thank you hahahah. i will update! i will! just please be patient as i have to update my other stories too! :) Report Review
WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER GONNA BE IN? I need to read more. MUCH more.Author's Response: I'm trying to get my other 2 fics up to speed and then I will work on it ;) Report Review
OMG I loved it! Made me smile once again... and I'm presuming Fred is crushing on her...? I like that you aren't making it too evident. It's good! Great job. :) xAuthor's Response: thanks! fred is adorable and i can't wait to play with their dynamic Report Review
This is the best story I have read in a long time!!!
It is great, I know you may not be interested in updating or writing a sequel, but please do it is amazing!!!
JaiAuthor's Response: awe i want to!!! i don't want to abandon this story but before i update this i have to update myother fics! don't give up ! Report Review
Now that I've reread this chapter again after a while, I have to say that I might curl up and die from HPFF Deprivation if this story is abandoned D:Author's Response: OH NO~ OMG. please don't. i will update it! i will! i have so much inspiration to write but i mUST FINISH MY OTHER STORIES. i should update within a few weeks at the LATEST, ok? :/ don't give up! i love you don't die ;_; Report Review
Aw man, I was really hoping that you would continue this ;__; 10/10Author's Response: i am! it's just that i don't have the time anymore and HP isn't my only fandom :( Report Review
This is such a great story! I really like it so please keep updating! and you asked for grammatical errors and there's one I found near the endish when Fred and Liv are sitting next to each other and their shoulders are touching because they're cold. After this part Liv is thinking about what George and Angelina are doing in the back but you accidentally said Fred instead of George :)
so anyways great story!
bye nowAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Gods be good, I'll update this fic as soon as possible. thx for the support! Report Review
Interesting story! I only wish there was more!Author's Response: I know! I haven't had time or enough inspiration to fix it :/ Report Review
WRIIITE!!! Please please, pretty please!!! And Fred still needs to get his act together. And get shown who's boss!!!Author's Response: I wish I had the time! I'm in a million other fandoms and it's really hard to keep up :/ i can't write filler chapters either - i want them to be good. if my heart's not in it one week, and it is the next, i'm lucky if i have time to actually write it out! sorry! i will try harder! Report Review
HEHEHEHEHE!!! Ahh, Fred. Trying so hard to believe that you have the guts to make a move on any girl you fancy, when really you're sitting there trying to work up the nerve to flirt with Liv. Silly boy. Anyway, I cannot WAIT for her daring plan, but it needs to knock Fred on his butt with surprise so I can be properly proud of the female race!Author's Response: OH, YOU JUST WAIT AND SEE ;) i can't garantee that the chapter will come soon but what i have in store is good! Report Review
dun Dun DUN!!! I love it! Again, more wrong-but-close words were used, but it's ok. I notice because I am an English Nazi. I love Sofia. Again. Of course she'd go on a scavenger hunt in wedges and a dress. It's so Sofia!Author's Response: Typical Sofia being all cute *shrug* what can you do. Report Review
:D I liked it! There were a lot of places where you put a wrong-yet-similar word to the word you wanted, but other than that the grammar stuff was pertty good. And I love Roger and Sofia!Author's Response: Sofia's cute! I can't wait to expand with her character. And Roger Davies is insufferable lololol. Report Review
Cool, I'm a bunny! Anyway (I use that word a lot... anyway :D) I liked this chapter and your HIGHLY subtle foreshadowing *cough BLARINGLY OBVIOUS cough* :D Points off for grammar and spelling mistakes though. What can I say? English Nazi, right here. Love ya, write on!Author's Response: Me and English are not so goodly :P one day I'll do a mass edit but for now, me and my lazy bum are going to let the mistakes lay. Report Review
I love Rodger. I feel like if I were in Liv's siuation, I would milk it for all it was worth. It would be so fun! Sorry, I'm a little bit of a sadistic child. Anyway, I lvoed this, Fred clearly likes her, onward!Author's Response: No, I'd probably do the same :P hahah. Report Review
NIIICE. My favorite quote is definitely:
Do you know how many times I got called in the boys' rooms and walked in on Andrew McAllister in nothing but his lucky spandex Quidditch trousers? I mean, the boy's got a body on him, but I was scarred for life. He's like more of a little brother, or pet ferret, than a boyfriend.
XD I like it, keep going!Author's Response: This is one of those fics that really just takes you out of your element for a bit XD Thanks! I'm gonna try to update this soon, actually. Report Review
ure so good
update your story is like may water which i need
i like the plot and everythinh amazingAuthor's Response: haha thanks :) i'm in a bit of a tiff with the next chapter so give me some time :P Report Review
(I don't really have anything to say, except that I can't wait for the rest :))
9/10Author's Response: The rest is coming :) it's just going to take a while. Report Review
“My ear is a very important part of my anatomy. I’d like to have two!”
IF GEORGE HAD SAID THAT I WOULD HAVE LOVED YOU FOREVER!
Not that I don't already love you forever. I would have just loved you forever more, because that would have been so spectacularly amazing :)
I was waiting for a kiss at the end there...next chapter?
9/10Author's Response: Hahah, you caught on to that didn't you? ;) Report Review
Why do I have a terrible feeling that this whole Katie/Oliver thing is going to fail badly...?
Probably not, likely I'm just being over-dramatic.
9/10Author's Response: Let's just say that it has ALOT to do with the plot. and it's going to be very tricky to understand just exactly who is playing who ;D Report Review
I like it...makes me wonder what the next chapter will have in store...:)
9/10Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Report Review
I like it :)
There was a lot of tension (and the sky is blue and the grass is green).
But seriously, you wrote that really well :)
9/10Author's Response: Thanks! Not one of my best chapters in my opinion. Report Review
Again, I like it :)
I'm actually terrible at writing reviews, so I'm just going to give you a 9/10 and be done with it :PAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks! Report Review
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