The chapter is good however it has some grammar mistakes, and I think u should give more spaces between the paragraphs. don't take me wrong ok? I'm just giving an advice so u can make this better which means if more people read, more people review.^_^ 10/10 Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thank you for your advice. I'll keep that in mind for my next chapter Report Review
Your story line is imaginative and fun to read. Please check your spelling. It detracts from the enjoyment.Author's Response: Thanks for the tip. :) Report Review
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