Reading Reviews for Peanut Butter
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Harry and Ginny Harry's letter

27th January 2009:
The chapter is good however it has some grammar mistakes, and I think u should give more spaces between the paragraphs. don't take me wrong ok? I'm just giving an advice so u can make this better which means if more people read, more people review.^_^


Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you for your advice. I'll keep that in mind for my next chapter

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Review #2, by hubris Harry's letter

24th January 2009:
Your story line is imaginative and fun to read. Please check your spelling. It detracts from the enjoyment.

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip. :)

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