I like how you show a softer side to characters we would not typically see with endearing qualities.

Author's Response: Thanks :D That's why I love the lesser characters, I can add to them, and give them an unexpected, softer side that's likeable. ^_^

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WoW. That is all i can say. Really. That was so beautiful and yet so sad. You really captured Narcissa as I see her, so very well done for that.
10/10
xx

- Narcissa48 -

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that I got the characterization right. :) Thanks for reading!

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Oh wow, I just loved this. I saw your post on the Memory Lane thread and just felt like checking out your author page, and I'm so glad I did! Seriously, I thought this was really amazing. Cissa's characterisation was great, and the emotion in it was just fantastic.

Wonderful job! 9/10.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad the characterization and emotion were good, that's what I try to focus on. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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i LOVE it!! :D i love this other side of narcissa that you've shown!!! :D :D lovely! (P.S. this is lyzzic from tda doing the review the above story thing :D)

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it :D

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You truely are amazing! And I'm not just saying that to make you feel better. I love your work! Can't wait to read more of your writing! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're giving my ego a huge boost, lol. :D

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