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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by corbinsgrl101 Chapter One

12th February 2012:
i think you should add more chapters :)

Author's Response: I'm going to try to! Thanks for the review(:
Kathleen xx


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Review #2, by jenna Chapter One

26th January 2011:
alright its a little lame not as good as a sketch ago but still quite cool and a good story

Author's Response: Thanks, yea I will admit it is a tad. It's one of my older stories. I should probably go back and edit it some more too. And thank you for the review(:

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Review #3, by _Keeper_ Chapter One

18th February 2009:
It was not lame, it was fluffy but really cute! I loved the idea of the pranks on the guest. You should write a second chapter, like the two watching their child prank another or something like that.

I give ya a 10

Author's Response: Thank you! That's a really good idea too, I might just do that. Thanks for the idea and review, I really appreciate it!!!

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