The idea for this fic is very good, and I like that it's similar to Twilight 'cause that's one of my favorite books. I also like your OC's, especially Gloria. I wonder if she has a special power? Please continue and update soon! Report Review
Great story! It's definitely interesting, it makes me want to read more! It's VERY nice! :) Except for one thing: It reminds me of twilight... A lot. A lot, a lot. But, yeah... If not for that, GREAT story! "I say... a week, before you've got that blonde one all over you." haha, I love that quote. If she doesn't end up being "all over" him, in one week, them I'm guessing that Sirius is gonna be interested (curious-interested) in her because she didn't fall for him??? Lovely story! I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: I know what you mean by the Twilight confusion, but recently, I only just finished the last book, and that's all i'v had in my head, hopefully by the time I get a few chapters into this it will have died down and it will become a bit more original :) Thanks for Reviewing, you're deffinatley my favourite person on here right now :D x Report Review
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