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Review #1, by Gerrand mcguire how many guys???

22nd January 2009:
you know,i liked your story.
But I would like it even better if the grammer and the punctuation marks would be perfect. Its hard to decipher whats going on.

hope i helped.

Author's Response: thank you i know i am trying to work on my grammar and punctuation my next chapter will be alot better

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