Hmmm.it was okay. The only reason it was just okay, is because I noticed a few errors. You need to watch your spelling. You need to capitalize names and the beginning of sentences. Once, I saw "wat" instead of "what". Don't use text language in the story. It'll get annoying. I saw the morie curse...yeah, what exactly IS that? I don't remember it being in the books. Anyway, besides those errors, it was a pretty good story. Report Review
I liked it -- one thing it's Teddy not Freddy.
Good job :)Author's Response: oops thanks about the correction i will get right on it! i was just wondering what ur initial resonse tpo it was emotionaly? i read some of these one shots and im crying my eyes out lol... what was ur emotional response ot what i wrote? sorry if its an inapropriate question. j xx Report Review
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