LOVE IT!
You're excellent at writing from Moody's perspective,
I love seeing Valora through other people's eyes.
Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I should be adding more chapters soon from Lily, James, Lupin, Tonks, Dumbledore and a few others. =) Keep up the R&R!

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This was the best!!! I loved seeing Valora from Moody's perspective. And it was so sad how Sirius reacted when he thought she was dead. And now I can see why Moody was pissed with her when she re-joined the Order. Another interesting view of of Valora :-)

Author's Response: Not only that she rejoined but she was a drunk. I really want to get across how bad what she did seems to other people in the order, but she has a way of winning people's hearts back. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Awww :-( This was kinda sad seeing as we know that Valora's mother dies. Still, it was interesting to see Valora as she was when she was a child. Really interested that you have decided to do something like this ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you. I really like Ava and also I realize that with the exception of her memories we don't know much about the relationships Valora had outside the marauders and severus so I felt this was a cool way to show them. Keep up the R&R!

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