I really liked this. I really did, because it was awesome. You have a really good beginning going on here. I like your oc, she's very believable. I really liking the way you're writing everyone so far :D It was written really well and despite the two time frames you used, it flowed rather well.

Excellent. I look forward to where you're taking this :D

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope I do get back to this eventually. I have to say I've been very bad about how I've treated my HPFF stories and I'm going to be focusing more on the Valora Nox Series now that I'm back, but like I said, I would like to get back to Dilemma when I have a chance.

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wow, this is a really good story. hope u write more!!

Author's Response: I try to work on it but to be perfectly honest this story isn't one of my priorities at the moment. I'll do what I can to get an update in, but I can't make promises.

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Evelyn Grey

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Loved it :D
10/10

dooo update realy soon :P

x

Author's Response: Thanks so much! i\\\'ll do my best.

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Evelyn Grey

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This sounds FABULOUS! i can't wait for more! hopefully!

Author's Response: This has been put on the back burner because of the Valora Nox Series, but I\\\'ll do my best to get a new chappie out by the end of July.

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hey, this is pretty enjoyable! i think your one of kinda few authors who dont write and sirius and your main character, which is awesome. your oc is very believeable, and likeable for me. i mean-an addiction to heels?! sounds like me, only im addicted to all types of boots!:) write more soon, and ill be waiting!...

Author's Response: Well thank you. This was actually in my head for a while but I've been busy writing my trilogy which is only halfway done. I'm glad it's different and that Tammy is likable. I personally love boots too but lately I've begun branching out to all kinds of black stilettos. :) I appreciate the R&R! Keep it up.

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Evelyn Grey

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