Its good so far but five chapters is a long time to wait so i would bring the main event closerAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review; I don't know if I'll even keep writing this fanfic, but if I do, I'll make sure I keep your advice at hand :D Report Review
Great chapter, loved it :)Author's Response: Oh wow! There are still a few readers here! Thanks for the review, although I am thinking of redoing all of my stories. Love, spreaddapoo Report Review
I like the whole switchey-switch thing. I feel sorry for Scorpius...Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! Yay, mission accomplished! Scorpius is indeed a sad, you-can't-help-but-feel-sorry-for-him kind of character... Report Review
I loved the whole part with what Scorpius was going through.
It was really well written!
Can't wait for more!
Lots of love,
TanyaAuthor's Response: Wow! It's been so long since I've written more of Chapter three... I'm sorry I haven't updated, it's just... I'm caught up with Escape and my other book I want to publish... And school! I'll try update when I can :) Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
Wow. That was a really great chapter.
I love your writing style, its so unique.
Lots of love,
TanyaAuthor's Response: THANK YOU! Wow, a writing style that's unique! That means a lot to me, thanks! Report Review
I love the name Pygott!
So far it is very interesting and i would love to read more!
10/10xAuthor's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review!!! Everybody seems to love Pygott's name (don't worry, I love it too!!!) I... need to update but... writer's block is a... block... Report Review
I like the new-story-chapter. Pygott is a funny name, and how you wrote the opening scene was pretty cool.Author's Response: ^^ Thanks so much!!!
I don't know a single person by the name of Pygott. I just made it up. LOLS :D Report Review
Its quite a gripping opening chapter and I am looking forward to reading more.
I like the line about going through the motions and you have neatly summarised how people are reacting to the killings. There is some good research material about how people react after a terror attack and you certainly seem to have shown this.
I hope that as your story develops the slytherins are not going to be stereotyped!
Great start. (just look out for a few typos)Author's Response: Haha, thanks ASC.
I really appreciate your review.
Erm... To be truthful I have no idea how people react after a terror attack. I guess I just assumed that's how the world would react, and wrote it on paper.
I don't like to make the Slytherins look bad, because they really aren't, so, I plan to shine light on the good sides as well as the bad.
Hold tight for the next chapter!!! Report Review
You've hooked me! I need more of this! Really exciting!
I have to say that you have a few spelling mistakes and such, but it doesn't really matter :p It seems like the start of a fantastic story! Hope you'll update soon, 'cause I can't wait to see what happens!Author's Response: Oooh... Spelling errors? That's a first for me. I'll re-edit it ^^ but if there are no errors, it may be because of American/British English differences... Dunno.
Thanks so much.
I'm in the middle of chapter two, so, hold tight! Report Review
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