This is really cute!!!
I hope you don't follow the movie step by step, but this is written well, and the characters are funny!
Hope you are planning on updating pronto!!
Cheers!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much! Who knows what I'll do haha. I am planning ongetting started on the next chapter today if I can! :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
Poor Riley... lol, I love it.
“Guys! Honestly, I can’t go out there dressed like this! I look like a ten-cent hooker!” I complained in a whisper.
“That’s the kind of girls he goes for, I mean, look at Olivia!” Jamie whispered back, rather rudely, in my opinion. Olivia smacked her arm before retorting in another whisper.
“He dated you too!”
“Yeah, well I am the classier one!” Jamie whispered back.
Lol, good job.
Update soonAuthor's Response: Haha, thank you!
Will do, I am literally typing this review whilst thinking up a good sentance for a part in next chappie...:) Thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
this is really cool, I love the idea. Riley's pretty interesting, and that fact that Sirius is TOTALLY oblivious is awesome! Keep writing!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!
I was actually on my way to work on chapter four right now:) [chapter 3 is already submitted] Thanks again! Report Review
Again, awesome, I'm just immagining all the million ways this would go, and how funny it would be if Riley was the first to break the boycott. Love the story, the characters and everything, yeah awesome story,
:)Author's Response: Haha yeah, there are so many different ways it could go...I only have a vauge idea of where its going myself, but don't tell :) Thank you, thank you and thank you, your reviews make me so happy! Report Review
Wow, this is really a pretty awesome story, and you haven't got many reviews so I thought I'd review both chapters...
Such a good idea for a story! Really wish I'd thought of it, lol, just imagining his face when realises what's going on, amazingAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I love reviews, they make me a happy author!
Thanks! I like the plot too, which is probably a good thing haha.
Thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
This is the best idea for story I have ever seen. I love it. :)Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! It just kind of came to me one day I guess...Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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