arghh!! why did you abandon it!?!?
I want to read more! please continue?
hehe i think Ellie is thinking of a certain someone she talked to at breakfast that morning...am I right? hehe
gahh please dont abandon this!! I want to know what happens with the project and who Felix's partner is (hehe awesome name by the way) and I want to know about P.D.H.M.E!!!
c'mon you can't do this to me!! Don't abandon!!
Love AmberfireAuthor's Response: sorry, but i wont be continuing this story. i had it planned out, but the idea just died, and i really ddint want to write it anymore. i just got really fed up with it when i couldnt get the story moving along better, and the more i thought about felix, the less i liked writing her.
so sorry, amberfire, but unless i REALLY get motivated, i wont continue this. thankyou very much for the review Report Review
My mom had my sister when I was in my early 20s. It was BIZARRE!!!
I think you captured her confusion very well. Nice work.
PalomaAuthor's Response: Thanks!
i apperciate the reviews for this story possibly more than the others, since i really dont like this story very much right now.
and im very happy i managed to connect with my readers. it makes me smile!:) Report Review
i love it! keep it up! cant wait to read the nxt chappie! this is so awesome! good work!!!
crazy whackoAuthor's Response: hi crazy whacko! thanks for the review! ( i know who you are, and thanks for reviewing. finally)
glad to see you found it interesting! Report Review
oh my i can review my own storyAuthor's Response: wow, and i can respond to my own review as well! Report Review
Its really interesting! Keep writing!Author's Response: Wow, thanks. Seeing as I'm a first time author, every review fills me with a bubble of happiness that doesn't burst until i realise that i have an assignment due the next day (but then i remember the review and i go "Wow so exciting!") So i'll keep on writing, you keep on reviewing! Report Review
This story looks really good! Please write more!Author's Response: thankyou so much for the review. Believe it or not, but this is the third re-write of the same story. Report Review
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