I'm still trying to find out who is on the Order's side and who is on the Death Eater's side. I'm thinking that this is linked in to your other fics (That girl that they were talking about, was that Cassandra?), but I still can't figure out how. I thought it was Sarah's family that was with the Death Eaters, then I changed my mind, and then I changed it again! I can't wait to find out!
Again, I love the perspective. The thought process is exactly how a young child would perceive complicated things like death, and you captured it nicely. Well done!!!
Nice chapter! I can't wait to see chapter three!!! 10/10Author's Response: thanks Leia!!! i am so glad you liked it so far. the next chapter will make it clear which family is which, but just to be efficient,Sarah's family is the death eaters,and Kate's is in the order. chapter three is almost done!!! yay! (hey, since u kno me so well, do u get the allegory yet???) Report Review
Hey Cass! I'm finally getting to read this!
This is very interesting so far. I really like how you've captured the tone of this-it seems just like a little girl's reaction to situation's like death. The whole thinking about if she would be replaced if she died-perfect!
I can't wait to see where the story goes from here!
Thanks for participating in my challenge!!!
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